Last Rose (Drabble Challenge)

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Last Rose (Drabble Challenge)

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<b>Title:</b> Last Rose
<b>Rating:</b> PG 13
<b>Pairing:</b> 1xR
<b>Word Count:</b> 109




He had years of happiness with her. Years of peace since the moment he stopped running from her, offering his soul and finally, his heart. Years of coming home to welcoming arms of the woman who loved him far more than her life.

He thought he had more years to show her his appreciation for the warmth she offered in the middle of the night. He thought he had years to give her the flowers he had known she sought. But the last rose he presented her lay on the cold ground. Wilted and unnoticed by the stone angel that stood guard over the body of his wife.

Relena?


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Post by AngelOfDeath »

I could really see it. . .

Seems that the "last" theme has conjured many sad thoughts. But it is terribly poignant, as well.
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Post by Nausica? »



* sigh *

Raine, no one can beat you when it comes to angst. You do it so well. You have such an ability to wrench my heart out and cut in two pieces...

That's why I love your work so much.

* wipes forehead * Lucky for me, this wasn't a full-fledged fic, or else I would've been crying :wink:

Lovely work, as always...


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Post by Kanya Barton »

Angst...I just love angst! I don't know what intrigues me so about it! Oh well, that was a very good use of words, although I personally think that angst is a lot easier to read and write when you can drag it out...or that just be my own sick little demented opinion. Good job otherwise!
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Post by maverickhunter »

That's just...incredible. I really like the angel idea - very, very appropriate. Seems like your story would take place sometime after mine eh?
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Post by Morrighan »

Aww... That was so sweet...yet angsty...

Great job!
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Post by lilac310 »

wonderfully written....among the three..this works for me...keep it up!!!
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Post by Melville's Best Friend »

Raine, you rock. That was great. Though....Counter the angst now, please. Go write a lemon. Shoo, missy. Shoo.
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