Eternity In His Hand 14/? [LEMON]

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Eternity In His Hand 14/? [LEMON]

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Warning: This chapter is a LEMON. Minors should either scurry away or promise not to blame me if they are scarred for life. This chapter is not integral to the plot so feel free to skip it if this kind of material offends you. Otherwise, for all you adults, please enjoy.



Eternity In His Hand
Chapter Fourteen





?I?m home, Heero.?



Barely had the words registered in his mind before he was crossing the distance between them and crushing her to his chest, his arms locked across her back and waist as he buried his face in her neck, breathing in the scent of roses from her clothes. He felt no hesitation in her as she lifted her arms and encircled them around his neck, leaning into him as her head came to rest on his shoulder. They stayed pressed together for a few minutes, aligning themselves to each other until it felt almost like they had never been apart. Heero had not truly realized how incomplete he had been without her until now. The way she fit so perfectly in his arms, so small and fragile, and the way she smiled, the way she said his name. All of them were pieces that filled him in, like finishing a puzzle.



Heero was whole.



?I missed you,? he whispered into her neck and her lips moved against his collarbone as she smiled.



?I missed you, too.?



He released a breath he hadn?t realized he?d been holding and stepped back from Relena to close the door. When he turned to face her once again she was watching him with deep turquoise eyes, her expression one of joy. Carefully he leaned back against the door, restraining himself. The first move could not be made by him. He didn?t want this to be a repeat of everything she had suffered with her previous Champions. He wanted her to choose him because she wanted to, not because she thought he wanted her to do. The problem was, he wasn?t sure she could do that even if she desired to. She seemed to be able to express her true feelings more easily around him but would she be able to do it now, when it mattered most?



Keeping his face blank of any emotions that might tip her one way or another, he spoke her name quietly, ?Relena, it?s your decision. This time it will be I who obeys whatever you command.?



Her eyes widened slightly and he felt the Rose Bride try to discern his will. He didn?t move a muscle, offering no hints as to what he wanted from her, and Relena?s fingers tightened on the pleats of her skirt as she struggled with herself. Every molecule in his body willed her the strength to fight and when she finally met his gaze again, her eyes were clear and so full of love he felt his knees weaken.



Those were Relena?s eyes.



And if only for that instant, the two of them truly saw one another and Relena came to him swiftly, gripping the fabric of his shirt to stand on tiptoe and kiss him. It was a sweet kiss but Heero quickly turned it into something else as he realized he had finally gotten his answer. His fingers tangling in her hair, he moved her backwards until the lower mattress hit the back of her knees and she fell into the bed, Heero bracing himself with his arms to keep from crushing her into the sheets. Her fingers quickly threaded through his hair as he explored her mouth, drinking her in like a man dying of thirst. She returned his passion with equal fervor and moaned softly when he nipped her bottom lip gently with his teeth. A very male part of himself was intensely pleased he could cause her to make noises like that and he trailed kisses down her neck to the delicate hollow of her throat where he could feel the fast beat of her pulse through the skin. Relena tilted her head back, granting him better access as thoroughly kissed every part of her available to him, her hands slipping down his back and under his shirt so that she could feel his muscles ripple as moved.



Suddenly frustrated with the amount of clothes she was wearing, his fingers went to the buttons of her blouse, his breath quickening as the smooth plane of her stomach was revealed to him as well as her lace-covered breasts. Relena smiled at the look on his face and let her blouse drop to the floor. She lifted herself slightly to reach back for the hooks of her bra when he pressed a chaste kiss to the spot between her breasts.



?Let me,? he whispered, his hot breath making her tingle. She nodded as his hands moved up and beneath her body, the calloused tips of his fingers so different from the silky smoothness of her skin. Surely no other girl could ever be this soft.



The bra came away in his hands and he paused for a moment simply to admire her. He offered her a half smile when she blushed before brushing his hands lightly over her bare breasts, feeling the sensitive nipples pucker under his touch. His mouth descended on the right one as Relena?s fingers began to undo the button of his shirt, her body arching into him as his tongue lavished her and he sucked gently. Small sounds of pleasure began to reach his ears as he switched to the other breast, keeping his hand on the first one and massaging it as Relena finally pushed open his shirt, baring his chest. He dedicated roughly one second to stripping off his shirt and throwing it across the room before he returned to Relena, his own groan mixing with hers as he felt her soft breasts press against his chest for the first time.



One of Relena?s arms held him against her while the other explored his well-defined torso, his breath catching abruptly when her hand drifted just under the waistband of his pants. Growling as she laughed sweetly, he caught her hand in his and pushed it against the mattress, keeping it there as he bent down and captured her lips for a long, breath-stealing kiss, his free hand skillfully unzipping her skirt and pushing it down her longs legs until Relena kicked it off completely. When he felt her go for the fly of his own pants he lifted himself slightly and helped her rid him of the obnoxious barrier. Clad only in his boxers, his need for her was instantly clear and he stilled as Relena caressed his face, her eyes so full of him he couldn?t breathe properly.



?Thank you,? she said and the words struck him so forcefully that he had to kiss her to regain his composure. When they were both ready again Relena pushed his boxers down over his hips and he took them the rest of the way off, dropping them down with the rest of their clothes. Before she could touch him, he bent and pulled her panties off smoothly, the scrap of fabric no obstacle to him.



There.



Both of them totally nude, Heero lowered himself onto Relena, her silky thighs opening for him. His erection pressed against her and Relena groaned his name.



?Heero.?



That was all it took.



He entered her swiftly and Relena took him in as far as he could go. A squeal escaped her but was quickly cut off as Heero kissed her hard, all his pent up emotions from the last few days flooding into her. Her arms circled his neck and she rocked her hips abruptly, making him groan into her mouth at the sensation. Taking that as a sign to get moving, he pulled out of her almost all the way before plunging back in, establishing a rhythm as sweat began to glisten over his skin and Relena started to toss her head as she moved with him. Her eyes were dark with pleasure, her slim body sliding against him with every wave that crested between them. She began to cry out softly and as the heat grew Heero felt himself start to tremble, his body tensing like the string of an instrument before a note is played.



?Relena,? he gasped hoarsely and she answered.



?Heero, please.?



One final thrust and stars exploded behind his eyes. Relena arced, her internal muscles clamping down on him as her heels thumped against the mattress. His warmth spilled into her, filling her, and he collapsed on top of her, his head pillowed on her shoulder as her body slowly began to calm from its climax.



Lying there, feeling her heart rate steady as his own breathing returned to normal, he realized he had never felt closer to anyone in his life. Even his mother, when she had been alive, had not spent much time with him, invoking love only by absence. His father had died shortly after he was born. Hilde was like the sister he had never had. But Relena?



He didn?t allow himself to say the words, not even in his mind. Not yet. Everything was still too new. Just the fact that she was there with him was enough.



For now.



Her fingers ran through his hair softly, lulling him as he pulled the comforter over their nakedness in case anyone barged in. She sighed contentedly as he settled against her again and for a moment, an old fear welled within him, one he had been trying to squash since that morning.



?Relena.?



?Hmmm??



His finger traced her collarbone. ?Did he? Did he make you do this with him?? His voice was flat but his body tensed in anticipation of her answer.



She kissed his hair. ?No, he didn?t.?



Overwhelming relief.



?Good,? he said gruffly, closing his eyes. He felt her smile but sleep was already pulling at him and he went willingly, knowing his dreams would only be good. If he had stayed awake he would have felt Relena hold him closer, tears sparkling at the corner of her eyes.



?I love you, Heero.?





TBC?


Author's Note: Wow, you have no idea how glad I am that's over. *wipes away sweat* I do more blushing writing these things then I do oogling hot anime guys. Hope it didn't turn out too bad. As I was discussing with Melodrama the other night, I have a hard time writing details in...ah..intimate..scenes and so I usually don't like to write lemons. Unfortunately, this one was necessary as I knew it was something that had to happen between them. I wanted it to be very sweet and touching and I'm not sure that came across but I'm just relieved its done! *collapses* About 2 more chapters and this shall be completely, maybe even only one if I can fit everything in.

Comments are appreciated! ^_~
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Post by Shevey »

That was so romantic Goldberry. Your story is
awesome and this chapter is my fave...no hentai
intended. :wink: I love the interaction you play
between the two lovers- keeping with the plot of
the story. I notice a lot of times people write
random lemons in their fics which has nothing-
or at least doesn't add anything- to the plot.
You did an awesome job keeping them in the story.
Your a wonderful writer!
I loved it.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

lovies, shev

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Post by RyanEX2000 »

First thing..."Dang yo that was fast :wink: .

Second...(Bzzzzzzt)
Beery:Yipe
Ryan:These things really do work.
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some jerk who desperately needs it.

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Post by Tomorrow »

Oh, that was so sweet. Everything was so in character and the emotions seemed so genuine between them. It was simple but so romantic.

Beautiful.

I thought it was clever how you added the part about his closeness to Relena versus his mother, father, and Hilde. It was a very profound moment that made the scene so believable. And it was also nice how he couldn't come up with the word to describe what he was feeling. It was just so Heero. 8)

You can do it, Goldberry, just one or two more chapters. ::Waves Berry-chan banner proudly:: See, I told you I was making one. :wink:

Good luck.

Love,
Tomorrow

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Post by shadowcat »

* wipes away tear*
Its so sweet this lemon fic, and you thought this lemon was bad, its VERy well written and you did a ammazing job on it.
I loved it how Heero wanted her to chose, not forcing her like the other champions might of.

This was a beautiful fic and i can't wait until you finish it!!!
Please continue to write more fics in the future, i'll read every single one of them!!!

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Post by zipdos »

Hey Berry!! I know how you feel. I wouldn't be able to write a lemon either. I must say that you did a terrific job and it's simply amazing.

Can't wait for more :salute:
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Post by Morrighan »

Ooh.... This is SOOO good.... It's really realistic and it really goes well with the fic. :D It's a very romantic way to bring it all together, and it makes their relationship very realistic.

Two more chapters??? Ooh... Must see them soon, nee-chan!!

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Post by lilac310 »

WOW...that was..(wipes sweat off my forehead) whew!....exhilirating....anyways...just wonderin'...has Relena ever done IT with someone else aside from Heero?...um...I mean u made it clear that she never did it with Trowa..but how about her previous Champions?..like Wufei?...'cause remember...in ur early chapters wherein she became Heero's Rose Bride and she's in his room..Relena was like automatically suggesting to do THAT stuff...thinking that Heero wants it too...was that an automatic impulse for her since her former Champions were all doin' that THING???.lolz..that was long...anyways, hope u can answer my question..i just can't get it out of my head for these past few weeks... :bounce:
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Quatre: Trowa's dead!
Heero: Yeah, you killed him.
Episode 25

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Post by Goldberry »

Actually, lilac, you are correct! Previous Champions HAD commanded her to have sex with them, not because they liked taking advantage of her or anything but because they felt it was their right as Champion. This goes along with the belief that most of the duelists think of the Bride only as a means to end and so doesn't really have feelings of her own. Heero, of course, is different and so he made HER choose whether or not to be with him.

And that's why we love Hee-chan! ^_~

Because of these previous encounters, Relena began to think that ALL her Champions would expect this of her and that's why she offered herself to Heero the first night.

Hope this answers your question!

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Post by lilac310 »

...thanx Goldberry that answered my question somehow... :) ...so in short...she never had sex....so..she's a virgin when she and Heero did IT, right? :D :bounce: anyways....keep that up..i really like the way u wrote the lemon scene and how u made Heero kinda jealous whether she did it with Trowa or not... :salute:
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Professor G., Episode 24

Quatre: Trowa's dead!
Heero: Yeah, you killed him.
Episode 25

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