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The Family Man
Posted: Thu May 09, 2002 11:56 pm
by blackrose
Heero left Relena 9 years ago to find himself. Now he's being given a little glimpse of the life he left behind, and all that he's missed.
<A HREF="./uploads/Lars-familyman01.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 1</A>
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:08 am
by mainime
Wah! Where's the rest? O_o;;
Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 7:43 pm
by Tobo Castit
I've been wondering the same thing as mainime... Where is the rest of it?
It's a good start, keep it going!
Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 8:00 pm
by The Angry Angel
Oh, evil! why you no continue?
You enjoy torturing us more than pleasing us, don't you?
I found a little hard that this wasn't an alternate universe-- although it's been 9 years, Heero's personality is still pretty different from the series, so I had trouble accepting that he's in character. Seemingly pretty expressive for Heero--I don't mind that he sys stuff, but usually with Heero, it's stoic/deadpan/cold when he speaks. I would have also thought that he makes sure, purposeful and graceful actions--instead of hesitating or 'passionately' shoving papers into his briefcase ^^;; --but I know that's my own bias and view of Heero--please forgive. You are such a strong writer and your stories are wow! enjoyable.
This would be SUCH an endearing and romantic ficcy if you would continue this [like how I would anticipate it, me having seen the movie], please come back to it someday soon.
