Heero left Relena 9 years ago to find himself. Now he's being given a little glimpse of the life he left behind, and all that he's missed.
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The Family Man
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mainime
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Wah! Where's the rest? O_o;;
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Support the police, beat yourself up.
My LJ --> kurosawabride
My fic LJ --> art_noveau
My art --> http://nekohime.deviantart.com
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Tobo Castit
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I've been wondering the same thing as mainime... Where is the rest of it?
It's a good start, keep it going!
It's a good start, keep it going!
The good writers touch life often. The mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. The bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies.
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It could be worse, you could be a character in a John Steinbeck novel.
I want to die as my Grandfather did, peacefully in his sleep. Unlike the three other people screaming in the car.
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It could be worse, you could be a character in a John Steinbeck novel.
I want to die as my Grandfather did, peacefully in his sleep. Unlike the three other people screaming in the car.
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The Angry Angel
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Oh, evil! why you no continue? 
You enjoy torturing us more than pleasing us, don't you?
I found a little hard that this wasn't an alternate universe-- although it's been 9 years, Heero's personality is still pretty different from the series, so I had trouble accepting that he's in character. Seemingly pretty expressive for Heero--I don't mind that he sys stuff, but usually with Heero, it's stoic/deadpan/cold when he speaks. I would have also thought that he makes sure, purposeful and graceful actions--instead of hesitating or 'passionately' shoving papers into his briefcase ^^;; --but I know that's my own bias and view of Heero--please forgive. You are such a strong writer and your stories are wow! enjoyable.
This would be SUCH an endearing and romantic ficcy if you would continue this [like how I would anticipate it, me having seen the movie], please come back to it someday soon.
You enjoy torturing us more than pleasing us, don't you? I found a little hard that this wasn't an alternate universe-- although it's been 9 years, Heero's personality is still pretty different from the series, so I had trouble accepting that he's in character. Seemingly pretty expressive for Heero--I don't mind that he sys stuff, but usually with Heero, it's stoic/deadpan/cold when he speaks. I would have also thought that he makes sure, purposeful and graceful actions--instead of hesitating or 'passionately' shoving papers into his briefcase ^^;; --but I know that's my own bias and view of Heero--please forgive. You are such a strong writer and your stories are wow! enjoyable.
This would be SUCH an endearing and romantic ficcy if you would continue this [like how I would anticipate it, me having seen the movie], please come back to it someday soon.
The Angry Angel
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Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels
Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"