A Darkening Dawn (Lemon)

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A Darkening Dawn (Lemon)

Post by blackrose »

Relena had to make a choice. Heero couldn't be both a lover and her protector which did she choose and was it the right decision?

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Post by Aieki Chan »

I like it. The lemon was better then I thought and I hope you continue! It doesn't seem like a one-shot fic so please continue! Nice story. :D
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I am a real big fan and I love all of your pictures :D *_*
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Post by Shooting Gundam Star »

Very good lemon! I can see why it won! Very sweet... :D I all happy now

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Post by Pure »

this is a good stry...im glad relena and heero are together...even if their life isn't all that great at least they have eachother. relena gets to have a real life and heero gets to be relena without wrying about their safety...so they win in the end after all :wink:


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Post by SHADOW »

this was pretty good in the fact the Relena was torn by haveing Heero as her body gaurd or as the man she loved

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Post by Chibi-sitter »

I love it and always will, since it is my first GW fanfic and :roll: lemon i have read :bounce: :bounce:

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Post by Raspberry »

One word: cute! Sooo cuute! Really lovely story! And everybody were soo in character... Relena always gentle... Heero so protective and lovely for Relena in the same time... Great, really great job! And continue! Write another romance-lemon! When Relena is the one who was in bliss! Oh God this story was so cute...*sigh* But sequel would be very nice :lol:
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Post by Wingnut »

Raspberry wrote:One word: cute! Sooo cuute! Really lovely story! And everybody were soo in character... Relena always gentle... Heero so protective and lovely for Relena in the same time... Great, really great job! And continue! Write another romance-lemon! When Relena is the one who was in bliss! Oh God this story was so cute...*sigh* But sequel would be very nice :lol:
Absolutely a sequal is needed. Also does this fit exactly with the canon time line, ie have the Gundams remained destroyed, and everything was as we saw it at teh end of EW?
I often ponder the thought of asking someone like Zapenstap to go ahead and take on the challenge of writeing a continueation of this, but never seem to get around to it.
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Post by Chibi-sitter »

:bounce: Oh yes please! :D continue this fic!!! :bounce:

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