umm on NC-17

Lady Casper · Post by **Lady Casper** » Wed Feb 16, 2005 1:14 pm

Betty is being threatened by a hammer?!?!?

How can one live with such threats?

(I'm rambling don't mind me)

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Sun Feb 20, 2005 9:48 am

peach: not anymore. betty got her hammer back!
betty: *rasies hammer* say it
peach: betty is sooooooooooo hot. she rocks the fanfiction world and peach is lowly.
betty: I'm bbaaaaccckkkk

Lady Casper · Post by **Lady Casper** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 1:26 pm

Maybe I should just hide the whole frigin toolbox from betty :-?

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Sun Feb 27, 2005 12:38 pm

hehehehehe!

aint noone gonna hurt you again my preious *caresses hammer lovingly...golem*

melodrama · Post by **melodrama** » Sun Feb 27, 2005 5:36 pm

Would it be possible to maybe stick to forum rules and refrain from chatting and going off topic in threads? It's a real pain in the rear to keep getting alerts on discussions I'm trying to watch just to see that it's some irrelevant waffle that was nothing to do with the subject matter.

Thanks

Mel

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Mon Feb 28, 2005 12:31 pm

okay okay dont have a chicken!

Lady Casper · Post by **Lady Casper** » Mon Feb 28, 2005 7:56 pm

Here is something that has been plaguing me.

Say you want your NC-17 to be AU, but you don't want it to appear that way at first. For instance, Beautiful Morning, Relena is happy feeling content being beside Heero. But then all of a sudden Heero bites her neck making her bleed.

From cozy and soft to hard and angst. How can you do something like that with out becoming like you missed something and confusing the reader?

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Tue Mar 01, 2005 11:59 am

dont do the bite in too much detail. say it pure and simple 'he bit her'. then give an explaination like 'it was like this every day....they make love, they sleep, she wakes, he bites,....that's the life of a vampiire.'

teardropdangel · Post by **teardropdangel** » Tue Mar 01, 2005 2:52 pm

I sort of like the idea of making the bite foreplay, so that the story flows. It can probably start off with a bit of kissing, a nip or nibble there, then the actual bite.

Lady Casper · Post by **Lady Casper** » Tue Mar 01, 2005 3:53 pm

Lady Casper wrote:Here is something that has been plaguing me.

Say you want your NC-17 to be AU, but you don't want it to appear that way at first. For instance, Beautiful Morning, Relena is happy feeling content being beside Heero. But then all of a sudden Heero bites her neck making her bleed.

From cozy and soft to hard and angst. How can you do something like that with out becoming like you missed something and confusing the reader?

Okay, but let me rephrase.

Heero, kisses Relena tenderly, she inturn kisses him back. Venturing down her soft silky skin, he decides he wants to bite her...hard!

Do you get where I'm going with this?

From a fluffy foreplay to an angsty sex fest.

Blissful Ignorance

A Heero and Relena Dedication site

umm on NC-17

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