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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:35 am
by samta22
you don't a lemon scene if you have this....
what a twist:eek: ... well at least she had Candace Mae!
The woman has seen the future
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 5:31 pm
by prizz
Oh my God. I wonder what will happen next..
It took you so long to update but this is worth the wait.
I hope you update soon.
[copy/paste to ff.net]
Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 7:14 pm
by AnShino
I had a feeling that would happen somewhere during that fic. XD
Oh Alex, poor you. And Relena! ;__; How utterly terrible. You had me all shaking with empathy for Relena.
Well, as always, I love this fic and I hope to see more updates in the future~! =] Happy New Year!
An
PS: I hope your moral problems have resolved themselves or will resolve themselves soon! *hug*
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 11:11 am
by perfectpeach
i was shaking the whole way through!
eyes glues to screen!
ignoring the virus eating my harddrive!
update soon honey and i'll bake triple chochchip coookies!
Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:27 pm
by broklyn
Wow! I really hope Relena doesn't marry him (it'd be too much like Superman (the new movie if you saw it)), but decides that she can live as a single mother and have a pretend father. I don't know but I know you do. So far, this is my favorite piece of prose ever written and PLEASE PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!
Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:48 pm
by rain2cry
Hm, can't say I didn't see this one coming. I thought Relena would get pregnant, but the whole "promise to Heero when he goes away again" added to the situation and made it more suspenseful. This chapter seemed shorter than the others, and as much as I liked it (even though you got cold feet
.) I would have liked to see what the dates with this Alexander guy had been like. Even with Gregory, you really didn't get into details, just implied what happened. I guess to show how deeply Relena is wrapped up in Heero? Just suggesting ^^;.
And my thought on the Relean getting pregnant....what if she loses the baby by miscarriage or some bad accident? Everyone would be happy, wouldn't they? Or would they....?
Anyway, good job Zap
.
Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 11:06 am
by freelight01
i got to admit, to me that wasn't unexpected, i was somewhat waiting for it.
err... maybe its jus me who found this fic somewhat predictable.
but i do love your writing style, it flows nice and easy from one scene to the next, and very emotional, keep it up and get the next chapter out soon ^_^
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 4:59 pm
by Kaili Charmer
Oh...WOW...awesomeness...
