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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 12:12 am
by kusanagi
you're right! she IS his weakness and she is NOT going to be having a lot of fun in the next chapter. Then again neither is Heero...
anyway, thankyou loads for all your comments!
ooo and your suggestions of how you'd get rid of Caan made me laugh, albeit sadistically
lol
next chapter on the way soon
Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 6:59 am
by SerenityDeath
man the cliff hangers are getting annoying.lol. Good story keep them coming. Can't wait for the rest.
Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 8:46 pm
by takisha16
Ok....so he's after Heero!
Relena is in for some really cruel punishment watching!
I am guessing he wants to destroy the almighty Heero or use him for
his purposes with Relena as the bait!!
What a meanie!!!! (severe understatement!)
He really is very warped, I still do wonde rhow Heero surviced a car
crash?! Oh well...geniuses should not be questioned!
The way you handle cliffies is awesome, albeit a little cruel, but still put
in a great way!
Nice update!
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 7:36 am
by TwinSoul.239
oh dear.......
Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 1:52 am
by lilac310
oh my! oh my!....I feel so bad for Heero..
Oh great, now since Heero's not cooperating, they're gonna start poking and twisting Relena so that he'll start 'fessing up...! Or at least....that's I see happening....what I would do if I was the baddie. (well duh, she's his weakness, riiiight??)
Yup! I think so too and I can't wait for the next chapter to find out!
Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:51 am
by twistedrealityoflove
Yup! I think so too and I can't wait for the next chapter to find out!
me neither
Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 11:54 pm
by Aeris_Eithne
As his face came into the light, she felt her stomach tie itself into thousands of painful knots. She felt as if knives had pierced her insides.
Pierced her heart.
Way to show, not tell! And you're so wonderfully concise. You're my hero.
