Four a day's my record!fallen dove wrote:I had hoped that by making the chapters shorter I could put them up more quickly, or, at least, that was the idea.

At any rate, good way to end it. I myself am a fan of cliffhangars, they keep the audience wanting more while at the same time giving you time to write the next one.
I agree, Heero's been a jerk, but if you think about it realistically he can't get involved. Imagine the headlines:
"VFM's Security Scandal"
It would completely destroy her reputation, and in the end I'm guessing he doesn't want that.