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Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 8:11 am
by miz_lou
Oh wow... the dynamics between those two are framed perfectly in your story fallen dove.

Oh wow... Relena is finally going to push Heero in a way he just doesn't know how to fight back properly.

Oh ... wow...

This is going to be mighty interesting.

*pending heartbreak* I hope that Heero doesn't screw things up completely. I mean, if he doesn't want her in there then that's to be respected -- just... be nice about it!!!

Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 2:50 pm
by Aristale Wolf
pure cruel and inhumane torture....u realise that dont u???? :cry: leavein it there at such a horenduosly hillarious scene.....very cruel and inhumane.....((shakes head solmnly)).....cant wait for the rest...hope it comes sooner than u plan..... *_*

Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 7:34 pm
by fallen dove
Hey guys, I am sorry it is taking me so long to get up this next update. I have almost finished "fixing up" the next chapter and it should be up either tonight or tomorrow morning-ish.
Thank you everyone for all you comments and critiques, (cliffhangers are, unfortunately, a fave of mine) and I hope you really enjoy the next enstallment!