Tricky scenes

Beer-monster · Post by **Beer-monster** » Fri Apr 08, 2005 3:40 pm

I encounter the problem of "hey, I know what this term is, but will the common reader?"

Oh yes, I am very familar with that problem, especially in my action scenes which involve a lot of technical martial arts. But thats what glossaries are for

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Fri Apr 08, 2005 5:30 pm

AH! So that's what angst is...thank you!

And beer, the plot is VERY familiar. *ehem* *ehem*

XD

teardropdangel · Post by **teardropdangel** » Fri Apr 08, 2005 6:45 pm

Lemons I have a bit of a problem writing when I've gone without for a long peroid of time. Sometimes I can seat down and write a decent lemon and other times, it's like....wha? How weird is that?

Actions scenes forget about 'em. :-?

When my muse is on vacation, (which I have to admit is pretty darn often), I tend to lean toward inane angst.

Beer-monster · Post by **Beer-monster** » Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:23 am

AH! So that's what angst is...thank you!

And beer, the plot is VERY familiar. *ehem* *ehem*

Do I detect a note of sarcasm. Hm..well maybe I was vbeing redundant. But I thought I should say something positive since I put this in the First aid forum.

Since people have trouble with lemons maybe we should get someone to give a lemon master class? Who's written a good lemon ?

Oh and watch that cough Melrose

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Sat Apr 09, 2005 6:31 pm

*ehem*threelittlewords*ehem*

My cough seems to be getting worse...XD

A lemon writing class? That would be good...

Beer-monster · Post by **Beer-monster** » Sat Apr 09, 2005 7:07 pm

*ehem*threelittlewords*ehem*

And a weird sounding cough it is.

Hm any suggestions ofr who should give the class?

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Sun Apr 10, 2005 5:30 am

Rose? Or even you, the master of ravishing himself? XD

Beer-monster · Post by **Beer-monster** » Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:18 am

Rose? Or even you, the master of ravishing himself? XD

Hmm Rose seems to be quiet of late, but I can ask.

Ravishing is one thing, writing it in a acceptible narrative form that is erotic without being pornographic is quite another.

I've not got much experience or ability with lemons (or ability generally).

Penybright · Post by **Penybright** » Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:38 pm

Perhaps Beck or War Dove? They're pretty much known as lemon writers...

~Penybright

Beer-monster · Post by **Beer-monster** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 6:56 am

Hey Penybright, what kind of terms would you use in an action scene that most people wouldn't understand that you wouldn't use elsewhere?

Anyone else got any tricky scenes?

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