Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2004 2:14 pm
beautiful imagery. i'm not usually a fan of song fics, but this was very well done.
I like the story very much...it captured his loneliness and guilt very welll...even when surrounded by happiness
*sigh*Why do you seems so surpised that I wrote something....*eyes latrines*
Do you two ever give it a rest?
Very good story Beer! I love the way you so perfectly showed her inner torment! Once again nicely written and no matter what you say some of us will always look up to you as a writer, ravisher is a dirfferent story.
Just kidding! I for one am humbled. *hugs*