[FIC] Desires of the Heart

C.G · Post by **C.G** » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:54 pm

Every gonna post 16???

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Sun Nov 02, 2003 1:10 pm

Lemon!!! WHOOT!!! When I read ch 17 on FFN, I had wondered if you had a lemon version...

Loved it, zapenstap!

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Thu Nov 20, 2003 11:55 pm

Ooh..!! This I like!

Now if FFN does decide to wipe your account, I'm all for supporting you. FFN has fallen in its standards that I don't like it as much anymore.

I can't wait to see more!!

san · Post by **san** » Thu Nov 27, 2003 10:03 pm

Oohh I really like the lemon in this chapter. Please keep the good work. Jesus! Wufei dose have some audacity to ask a question like that, but that's him. Great story and I agree with Wingnut, he better say those three words. I'll be reading!

Kari · Post by **Kari** » Sun Nov 30, 2003 4:25 pm

Damnit!!! When will Heero realize he loves her.Men *sighes*
Kari

katykit · Post by **katykit** » Tue Dec 09, 2003 8:38 am

I LOVED your fanfic of 'The Mandred Chronicles', especially the last ending 5 chapters, amazingly written and completely in deph characterisation. More fanfics like that, for they are one of a kind and completely readable over and over again. The plot, especially HY/RP was so wonderfully written, you must give yourself more praise!

You are probably one of the most talented, if not, the best writer on blissful ignorance, you have a talent that you must not waste!

zapenstap · Post by **zapenstap** » Tue Dec 09, 2003 4:45 pm

Oh wow! Thank you so much for such a thrilling review! I was feeling kinda "eek" on TMC recently 'cause I worry that it's sorta (vaguely) my Mary-Sue fic what with the random OCs and everything. This review made me feel so much better. Thank you ^_^ One day, I will write my original world stuff...as soon as I work out the kinks. Lol. But wow, I feel so honored by your praises. I'm not sure that they are deserved. Thank you very much! As soon as finals are over, I will get back to writing Desires and my Fruits Basket fic, which also contains elements of my "other worldness." Thank you for relieving my stress! *is thrilled*

-zapenstap

NafX · Post by **NafX** » Wed Dec 17, 2003 1:09 am

This has got to be just about my favourite story at the moment!
It's fantastic!!!
I love your stuff ... you write so well ...
I'm really enjoying your take on Heero .. it seems so right to me.
He's exactly how I'd imagine him in this situation ...
This really is an excellent story.
Do come back soon with more won't you?

Thanks for your efforts, they really are appreciated ...

~Nat.

Mizaya · Post by **Mizaya** » Sun Dec 21, 2003 8:30 pm

If you come to BI from ff.net to read, can you reply on FF.net too? I know it's a lot to ask, but you can just copy/paste your review if you want.

Yes yes, love, copy and paste are my friends. Okay, I'll have you know that I stayed up last night until 7 f**king am to finish reading this! Now granted that isn't much later than my normal bedtime, but still! It's all your fault! You were encouraging me! Don't worry - I forgive you

. Onto the review:

This was by far one of the most unique fanfics I've ever read. It seemed more realistic and human than a lot of relationship fics. You had a great grasp on the fumbling nature of a first relationship without fumbling yourself in writing it. Too often writers make relationships silly and overly perfect which really ruins it for me. Yours on the other hand had a good balance of unsurety and awkwardness. There were some things that I couldn't relate, too, but I know where you were coming from. I think you did an excellent job of making Heero and Relena your own (hehe) without making them ooc, and that's something that's rare indeed. I could probably go on for an hour about a hundred little things that I noticed, but I'll just tell you about that stuff outside of the review. Just know that overall it was excellent and involving and made me feel fuzzy! I don't even want to think about what you have in store for us in the next chapter. I think sex-fiend Heero is gonna get shut down *sob*. I'll read through the tough spots, though! Keep it up!

Mizaya · Post by **Mizaya** » Tue Dec 23, 2003 6:23 pm

Aw, you're mean, ending it right there! ^_^ I totally saw that coming. Heero is bored and Relena is too easy on him. Such tragedy. Well, some parts were sweet, but for the most part it was highly depressing. How could you do that to me? *Grumble* At least we saw Quatre for a bit. I'm liking the pilot cameos.

Um, anyway, I thought you did a great job of showing how when a relationship goes south one person is always inclined to think the best of it anyway and make excuses. I feel so bad for Relena, not realizing that Heero is being kind of a jerk. I can't believe you made your favorite character so blase about the whole thing. I'm sure it will get even better next chapter, though. Relena should've taken Wufei's comments to heart more.

Can't wait until next chapter. I'm hoping for Heero's POV and more angst. Oh, but first write that Kyoru lemon I've been begging for, er, demanding. *glomp*

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