A post-series, IC, Heero and Relena romance that is supposed to reflect a realistic relationship as judged by modern standards. Work in Progress. Includes Limes/lemons.
I SCREWED UP the order of the CHAPTERS! Please note the numbers! *wince* Many apologies!
[FIC] Desires of the Heart
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[FIC] Desires of the Heart
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PLEEEZZZEEE tell me you are rewriting chapters 14 and 15 for public consumption for this website!! I've read the stuff on FF.net and, GOD! it is amazing!!!
Also, It's good to see an author that writes chapters as big as my own!!
Also, It's good to see an author that writes chapters as big as my own!!
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*nods* I agree with that. Please???? Morri would be very happy....trekkiexb5 wrote: PLEEEZZZEEE tell me you are rewriting chapters 14 and 15 for public consumption for this website!!
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Oh, hey! Thanks guys! Yeah, chapters 14 and 15 are on ff.net. I probably won't change them much. I actually LIKE writing limes more than lemons; I just worry that limes are stretching it... *sweatdrop* But the full-lime chapter (16) is coming. The reason 14 and 15 aren't posted here is because they're stored on my other computer and i can't get at them just yet. Anyway, thank you very much for the reviews!!!! I'll be posting the whole story on one of the forums eventually (which one?)
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Post them on the Featured Authors forum. You're entitled to it, considering you're one of the featured authors....zapenstap wrote: I'll be posting the whole story on one of the forums eventually (which one?)
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Okay, I added the two subsequent chapters and the newest chapter! unedited ^_^ If you come to BI from ff.net to read, can you reply on FF.net too? I know it's a lot to ask, but you can just copy/paste your review if you want. I just like review numbers to increase when i update. I can't help it. Some people judge whether or not to read a story based on them and the ratio is important. 
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Ooh.... I thought that came out perfectly. He-he-he... I get why she thought it was funny... Perfectionist.
Look forward to more!!
Perfectionist. Look forward to more!!
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Whooha! Heero got laid. Poor Relena though, sucks being a virgin. I hope Heero's able to better please her in the future. There will be lots of futures right? And by please I mean mentaly too.
Heero in grade school:
Teacher: *holds up a card that says 'love'* What is this word Heero?
Chibbi Heero: ...?!
Teacher: Love Heero, It says love. Now say it with me. Luuuvaaah
Heero: Laahhhh...vvveer. Louver! Like a slanted roof? The kind that lets the smoke out?
Teacher: *Smack forhead* Yah. Right on kid.
Heero in grade school:
Teacher: *holds up a card that says 'love'* What is this word Heero?
Chibbi Heero: ...?!
Teacher: Love Heero, It says love. Now say it with me. Luuuvaaah
Heero: Laahhhh...vvveer. Louver! Like a slanted roof? The kind that lets the smoke out?
Teacher: *Smack forhead* Yah. Right on kid.
I choose to live.
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Morrighan<-- yep. That, and pure relief that it wasn't so bad as she was afraid it was going to be. All that emotion building up to something and then it's over and heero said something funny (not that he meant it to be a joke) and she just laughed with relief. I'll explain that next chapter.
heh heh. it's kinda fun being able to reply to reviewers this way!
illiterate<-- *bursts out laughing* I literally rolled out of my chair! Oh my, that's great. Yeah, i don't want to tell you what happens though. Please keep reading!
heh heh. it's kinda fun being able to reply to reviewers this way!
illiterate<-- *bursts out laughing* I literally rolled out of my chair! Oh my, that's great. Yeah, i don't want to tell you what happens though.
Please keep reading!I said it on ff.net and I'll say it again here.
Normally I wouldn't be bothered by the title of the chapter, but after last night it just is not appealing. (Damn Yankees) I fail to see exactly why Relena was laughing at the end. And it is completely understandable why what happened happened. But as stated they will get it right, sooner rather than later if Heero has his way.
However as I recall I said that I would be irked if Heero hadn't said those three words before they went all the way. Heero had better watch his back 'cause I'll be after him, and I might bring Mandred with me.
Overall another wonderful chapter.
Normally I wouldn't be bothered by the title of the chapter, but after last night it just is not appealing. (Damn Yankees) I fail to see exactly why Relena was laughing at the end. And it is completely understandable why what happened happened. But as stated they will get it right, sooner rather than later if Heero has his way.
However as I recall I said that I would be irked if Heero hadn't said those three words before they went all the way. Heero had better watch his back 'cause I'll be after him, and I might bring Mandred with me.
Overall another wonderful chapter.
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Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.