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Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2003 1:25 am
by DeadPoet
Yep... i have to agree, this fic is great. And I truly much like the lines in the story...
i even have my favorite

"Are you real?" ..... Oh, i love that line^_^
And when Dorothy and Duo squealed when they saw heero kissed Relena, I mean that was just so cute of them. Being happy for their friends. Indeed, touching ^_^
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2003 3:39 pm
by Wingnut
Something's up and it doesn't look good. The first two chapters automattically bring up the dialouge box that says if I want to save the file(s) to my computer or not, and chapter 3 has all of the code markings visible with none of the effects. In short, I think something got lost in the translation here. :-?
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2003 7:27 pm
by zapenstap
Thanks, Wingnut! I treid to fix the problem. The chapter has been reloaded as breathlesswhisper3-2 (as in take 2). I hope that it works this time. It did for me, but let me know if something is wrong.
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2003 10:29 pm
by Wingnut
Nope, all 3 chapters are functioning properly and appear just as good as ever.

It's been
way too long since I read this all the way through at once.

Forgat just how hot that lemon was. (That's a good thing.)
Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 1:00 pm
by Chibi-sitter
Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2004 3:43 pm
by Raspberry
Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 8:25 pm
by Tomorrow
::Sigh::
I thought I replied to this a long time ago, but apparently not. I've read this series many times, and each time is more rewarding than the last.
A lot of times with your writing, Zapenstap, I get too emotional (whether happy, angry, or sad) to respond. I can't make myself do it, simply because I know my reply would be impulsive, based on the last emotion your story invoked. If the story ends with angst overtones, I'm usually too upset to be able to coherently express my feelings in words. If the piece ends on a happier note, I'm usually swooning too deeply or much too giddy to do anything but babble.
This was the first lemon I ever read, and it embodies everything a story dealing with true, soulful love, expressed in a physical way, should be. I really thought I was feeling everything Heero and Relena felt. They were so true to their characters, and everything they did was so perfectly described. I can't... I can't really explain how much I love this story - that it's my FAVORITE story of all time.
I've told you this time and time again, but still I'll repeat it: your writing is so emotional, so beautiful. I can't say that enough.
I'll stop babbling, now. -_-;
~Tomorrow
Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 11:22 pm
by zapenstap
T_T
Oh, Tomorrow! Your review almost brings tears to my eyes! I'm so touched. I was just thinking how I wanted to write another 1xR lemon... and then I get this from you. *sniffle*. I'm so pleased really, that you think so much of this little story. If I write another lemon, I hope it is as good as this one! I can't quite believe my writing affects you as much as you say--so much that you can't review! I can only hope that is true. It's the realization of a dream. *happiness* Thank you so much!
Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 10:19 am
by Tomorrow
Of course I meant it, Zapenstap. Silly.

And you should be proud of yourself - you have a great talent. I'm just glad that my reply encouraged you as much as it did. ^_^
As for
Desires of the Heart (since I'm thinking about it right at this moment): oh how you upset me so!!! :x :x :x I can't keep reading it if you're going to make everything so angsty. I just can't take it. Now that I wrote "Rigid," all of my angst tolerance has been depleted. I can't deal with the tragedy!!!
::Runs off to escape the angst::
~Tomorrow
Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 10:08 pm
by zapenstap
Oh, poor Tomorrow! The story will not always be sad! But I'm sorry to say Heero and Relena must go through the grinder as all young, naive hearts must do before they can mature. As for their future...we'll have to wait and see. ^_^