i even have my favorite
"Are you real?" ..... Oh, i love that line^_^And when Dorothy and Duo squealed when they saw heero kissed Relena, I mean that was just so cute of them. Being happy for their friends. Indeed, touching ^_^
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Yep... i have to agree, this fic is great. And I truly much like the lines in the story...
i even have my favorite "Are you real?" ..... Oh, i love that line^_^
And when Dorothy and Duo squealed when they saw heero kissed Relena, I mean that was just so cute of them. Being happy for their friends. Indeed, touching ^_^
i even have my favorite
"Are you real?" ..... Oh, i love that line^_^And when Dorothy and Duo squealed when they saw heero kissed Relena, I mean that was just so cute of them. Being happy for their friends. Indeed, touching ^_^
" But only in their dreams can men be truly free. 'Twas always thus and always thus will be." ~Keating, DPS
Something's up and it doesn't look good. The first two chapters automattically bring up the dialouge box that says if I want to save the file(s) to my computer or not, and chapter 3 has all of the code markings visible with none of the effects. In short, I think something got lost in the translation here. :-?
BI''s resident Gundam mecha master and informant.
Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.
Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.
Nope, all 3 chapters are functioning properly and appear just as good as ever. 
It's been way too long since I read this all the way through at once. Forgat just how hot that lemon was. (That's a good thing.)
It's been way too long since I read this all the way through at once. Forgat just how hot that lemon was. (That's a good thing.)BI''s resident Gundam mecha master and informant.
Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.
Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.
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this is the second fic I've read by you, YOU ROCK -
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I love... no.. I'm addcited to this kind of stories
It was truly amazing, Zap! You showed us the meaning of love and "making love" 
Relena asked about sex, but Heero gave her his love... And she returned it... And that's what I love I could say that this made my day, by it's nearly midnight, so I'll say: This will make my dreams would be good and sweet How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI
Just be yourself.
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI
Just be yourself.
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Tomorrow
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I thought I replied to this a long time ago, but apparently not. I've read this series many times, and each time is more rewarding than the last.
A lot of times with your writing, Zapenstap, I get too emotional (whether happy, angry, or sad) to respond. I can't make myself do it, simply because I know my reply would be impulsive, based on the last emotion your story invoked. If the story ends with angst overtones, I'm usually too upset to be able to coherently express my feelings in words. If the piece ends on a happier note, I'm usually swooning too deeply or much too giddy to do anything but babble.
This was the first lemon I ever read, and it embodies everything a story dealing with true, soulful love, expressed in a physical way, should be. I really thought I was feeling everything Heero and Relena felt. They were so true to their characters, and everything they did was so perfectly described. I can't... I can't really explain how much I love this story - that it's my FAVORITE story of all time.
I've told you this time and time again, but still I'll repeat it: your writing is so emotional, so beautiful. I can't say that enough.
I'll stop babbling, now. -_-;
~Tomorrow
I thought I replied to this a long time ago, but apparently not. I've read this series many times, and each time is more rewarding than the last.
A lot of times with your writing, Zapenstap, I get too emotional (whether happy, angry, or sad) to respond. I can't make myself do it, simply because I know my reply would be impulsive, based on the last emotion your story invoked. If the story ends with angst overtones, I'm usually too upset to be able to coherently express my feelings in words. If the piece ends on a happier note, I'm usually swooning too deeply or much too giddy to do anything but babble.
This was the first lemon I ever read, and it embodies everything a story dealing with true, soulful love, expressed in a physical way, should be. I really thought I was feeling everything Heero and Relena felt. They were so true to their characters, and everything they did was so perfectly described. I can't... I can't really explain how much I love this story - that it's my FAVORITE story of all time.
I've told you this time and time again, but still I'll repeat it: your writing is so emotional, so beautiful. I can't say that enough.
I'll stop babbling, now. -_-;
~Tomorrow
The Importance of Tomorrow:
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
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Oh, Tomorrow! Your review almost brings tears to my eyes! I'm so touched. I was just thinking how I wanted to write another 1xR lemon... and then I get this from you. *sniffle*. I'm so pleased really, that you think so much of this little story. If I write another lemon, I hope it is as good as this one! I can't quite believe my writing affects you as much as you say--so much that you can't review! I can only hope that is true. It's the realization of a dream. *happiness* Thank you so much!
Oh, Tomorrow! Your review almost brings tears to my eyes! I'm so touched. I was just thinking how I wanted to write another 1xR lemon... and then I get this from you. *sniffle*. I'm so pleased really, that you think so much of this little story. If I write another lemon, I hope it is as good as this one! I can't quite believe my writing affects you as much as you say--so much that you can't review! I can only hope that is true. It's the realization of a dream. *happiness* Thank you so much!
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Of course I meant it, Zapenstap. Silly. 
And you should be proud of yourself - you have a great talent. I'm just glad that my reply encouraged you as much as it did. ^_^
As for Desires of the Heart (since I'm thinking about it right at this moment): oh how you upset me so!!! :x :x :x I can't keep reading it if you're going to make everything so angsty. I just can't take it. Now that I wrote "Rigid," all of my angst tolerance has been depleted. I can't deal with the tragedy!!!
::Runs off to escape the angst::
~Tomorrow
And you should be proud of yourself - you have a great talent. I'm just glad that my reply encouraged you as much as it did. ^_^As for Desires of the Heart (since I'm thinking about it right at this moment): oh how you upset me so!!! :x :x :x I can't keep reading it if you're going to make everything so angsty. I just can't take it. Now that I wrote "Rigid," all of my angst tolerance has been depleted. I can't deal with the tragedy!!!
::Runs off to escape the angst::
~Tomorrow
The Importance of Tomorrow:
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.