A Call to Arms [PG-13/NC-17]
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- Writing fanfic is not a terrorist action|Mech Pilot Fanboy
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Oh-ho, kinky princess!! Classic Tristan-Isolde love affair!!
I really liked how you jumped from scenes straight into the midst of the lemon--that was fabulous!
AMAZING!! I can see a major plot and many, many sub-plots! They're all well-developed ~ Kudos
Out of curiosity, what is the penalty on a knight's head and a princess' if their tryst is found out by the heads? Death? Stripping of titles, exile?
Furthermore, who is this High Council? A religious body? Why do they appear to have more power than the royal family?? :evil: EAT A DEVIL you old windbags!
It's medieval--or Renaissance........... :-? ?? I'm really into it!
Very nice
Double A: out.
I really liked how you jumped from scenes straight into the midst of the lemon--that was fabulous!

AMAZING!! I can see a major plot and many, many sub-plots! They're all well-developed ~ Kudos

Out of curiosity, what is the penalty on a knight's head and a princess' if their tryst is found out by the heads? Death? Stripping of titles, exile?

Furthermore, who is this High Council? A religious body? Why do they appear to have more power than the royal family?? :evil: EAT A DEVIL you old windbags!

It's medieval--or Renaissance........... :-? ?? I'm really into it!
Very nice

Double A: out.
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Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"
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Hmm, this story sounds very promising
As I see few things which did not really fit into Medieval scenery, I am sure that without those things the story would be completely boring
Great work and please continue!
P.S. AngryAngel, if you and Alilamba don't mind, I'll try to answer few of your questions.
First of all, the time the fanfic is set in is centairly Medieval, as 1225 is still that period. Medieval starts at 476 year our era and ends basically when Columbus discover America in 1492.
As I am not sure what Alilamba plans to do with characters in this fic, I must say that during Medieval people were very religious, so it was almost impossible for the girls to be 'experienced' during wedding nights. It was a great sin to be 'unpure' unless you weren't raped. Besides, girls were thrown to marriages (even from the lowest class) by their fathers at ages +13, because the 'mature' age was reached much faster than nowadays. Back to the topic: Heero would be judged to death I presume because having sex with Princess before marriage was unacceptable. As for Relena, I am not sure. If she was from a lower class, she would probably be damned and so on. But she is a princess... I think it would depend on her guardian, who is Milliardo, as to what to do to her.
I hope this explained you a little bit, and if you have already known... sorry for boring you

As I see few things which did not really fit into Medieval scenery, I am sure that without those things the story would be completely boring


Great work and please continue!

P.S. AngryAngel, if you and Alilamba don't mind, I'll try to answer few of your questions.
First of all, the time the fanfic is set in is centairly Medieval, as 1225 is still that period. Medieval starts at 476 year our era and ends basically when Columbus discover America in 1492.
As I am not sure what Alilamba plans to do with characters in this fic, I must say that during Medieval people were very religious, so it was almost impossible for the girls to be 'experienced' during wedding nights. It was a great sin to be 'unpure' unless you weren't raped. Besides, girls were thrown to marriages (even from the lowest class) by their fathers at ages +13, because the 'mature' age was reached much faster than nowadays. Back to the topic: Heero would be judged to death I presume because having sex with Princess before marriage was unacceptable. As for Relena, I am not sure. If she was from a lower class, she would probably be damned and so on. But she is a princess... I think it would depend on her guardian, who is Milliardo, as to what to do to her.
I hope this explained you a little bit, and if you have already known... sorry for boring you

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How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI
Just be yourself.
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI
Just be yourself.