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Kiss

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my short little blurb that i wrote when i had a sudden surge of inspiration. Enjoy.


They had been spending too much time together. So as a consequence, the inevitable happened. The romance started with a good night kiss. He was just so irresistible, standing there in her doorway, worn out from a week of little to no sleep and constant vigilance. So she kissed him. She had expected him to pull away and inform her that they couldn't, shouldn't and wouldn't, because it was inappropriate and unprofessional. However he didn't. Instead he let her lips linger against his for a little while before pulling away. With a low "goodnight" began five years of kissing, touching, waking up against each others chest, worrying if he will come back, taking several bullets for her, fighting over absolutely nothing, and constant companionship. But most of all, five years of loving each other. Therefore at this particular moment, it felt right to end courtship and begin marriage with a kiss.
Mucho luv,

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Post by Morrighan »

Awww...!!!! I love the fluff. I love how the kiss theme ties the beginning and the end together. :D

Masterfully done. :D
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Post by RelenaDorlinYuy1 »

aww that is soo sweet ^_^ i feel giddy for some reason hehehhe good job

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:) Yea! So short and yet so sweet! Like a tootsie roll... :lol: Great job! 8)
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i love shorties! thank you my love!
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Post by kawaiiemogirl »

This short story made me happy inside. :D Thanks. I was kinda having a bad day. This makes me feel better. D:
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Post by Andrea »

Sweetness!!

I loved it, Sitboy007; I enjoyed how you kept the language light and fluffy. Lovely!!
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Post by sitboy007 »

kawaiiemogirl said
This short story made me happy inside. Thanks. I was kinda having a bad day. This makes me feel better. D:

i'm glad i could mae you feel better.

Thanx for the reviews!
Mucho luv,

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We aren't laughing at you, we are laughing near you.
(Robin Williams, Dead Poets Society)

Are you a mexican or a mexican't?
(Johnny Depp, Once Upon A Time in Mexico)

Darling, nothing is certain until you're dead, and even then I'm sure that God negotiates.
(Anjelica Housten, Ever After)
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Post by HiFreak »

That was the best paragraph I have ever read.
You have manage to sum up all my dreams for Heero and Relena in less than 100 words. Way to go. :salute:
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Post by sitboy007 »

Oh, wow, thanx, HiFreak. That really made my day.
Mucho luv,

S.B.007

We aren't laughing at you, we are laughing near you.
(Robin Williams, Dead Poets Society)

Are you a mexican or a mexican't?
(Johnny Depp, Once Upon A Time in Mexico)

Darling, nothing is certain until you're dead, and even then I'm sure that God negotiates.
(Anjelica Housten, Ever After)
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