Relena Was Dead (7)

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Heero's Kitty
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Post by Heero's Kitty »

Believe me, I'm a die-hard Heero fan until the very end, but I have to agree with the others on this: he's being a selfish brat! Relena and Trowa have found love, Heero's just chocked up because it's not him. If he really loved her, he'd be happy for her. :cry:

...ug..actually believing that Trowa and Relena are better than she and Heero? :eek: I feel dirty...

hurry with the next chapter, tell me Heero develops a heart and let's Trowa go back to his family.

~Kitty
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Heero's Kitty
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Post by Heero's Kitty »

Believe me, I'm a die-hard Heero fan until the very end, but I have to agree with the others on this: he's being a selfish brat! Relena and Trowa have found love, Heero's just chocked up because it's not him. If he really loved her, he'd be happy for her. :cry:

...ug..actually believing that Trowa and Relena are better than she and Heero? :eek: I feel dirty...

hurry with the next chapter, tell me Heero develops a heart and let's Trowa go back to his family.

~Kitty
This life is transitory, a dream of flesh. If I am stolen from you I will see you again...In a place where no shadows fall...
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Post by Nausica? »


* glomps Wicked * I am completely torn over this... good job ^_^

I do agree with those that say Heero is being kinda selfish, since I suppose he always assumed that Relena would end up with him someday. But I still can't help feeling a bit sad for the guy. Maybe it's just the extremes of what Relena went through to break out of her life that got Heero where he's at right now. I don't think I would feel this way if she'd have just said, "I love Trowa and I want to have a new life with him, so I quit." Yeah, I believe it's because she went so far as to stage her own death, that Heero's feeling the way he is and why they're so at odds right now.

* shakes head * I honestly don't know where you're going with this fic, but I can say for sure that I'm gonna be haunting the Alt. forums for a while to come :wink:


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Kanya Barton
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Post by Kanya Barton »

OMG, when Trowa began to cry I began to tear up as well...God, I NEVER cry! *pats Wicked on the back* Thank you Wicked for finally bringing out the softie in me! Now excuse me while I go cry everyone a river!

Still lovin' the story! Peace out!
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Post by Pure »

this waz SO awesome! you HAVE to write more! i want to know if trowa does get taken to preventer hq or if heero gets off his high horse and realizes that trowa is finally happy and lets him go...probably not...but a girl can dream. Keep up the awesome work!



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wicked
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Post by wicked »

Thank you one and all. ^_^

Actually there is more here than meets the eye. I'm talking major ficcage going on with this one. Lots and lots of chapters...when I get around to writing them.

Which is soon...really....

Thanks a bunch! *major group glompage for Alt. fans*

~Wicked
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silversong
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Post by silversong »

(pokes wicked, because she hasn't seen her in a while, and on general principles because a new chapter hasn't been posted yet)

Halloooo!!

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Sing O my love, O my love, my love, my love
This have I done for my true love!

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Post by RyanEX2000 »

It's one thing to say that HK,but another thing to feel it.I think Naus hit it right on the nose.I know I would feel similar if someone I loved disappeared off the face of the earth then turned up married some years later to one I considered a friend and probably one of the few who knew how I felt about her.

And my dear wickedly Wicked.I dont know whether to look forward to,or shudder at the thought of many chapters,displaying ma boys' bad side :-P .

I'll have to grit my teeth.
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Post by Symee-Sama »

Well, congratulations. You are the first person to actually make me dislike Heero in a fic. Stupid git. Breaking them up.... Ooh, I wanted to hurt him when I read this fic, but I too can understand why he would act this way. I was a little bit peeved that Relena didn't tell him that she was okay. For all he knew, she was dead, right? But I guess she couldn't, because then he would find her...

Oops, I just realised that I'm sort of babbling, so I'll try to make the rest of this quick. This chapter was utterly heartwrenching, and I think the reason that it affected me so much was Trowa's and Relena's children. They're going to lose their father, which hits a personal chord with me (my parents are divorced, but this is much much worse). Anyway, I can't wait to read more!

Symee (Who is very tired from all of her babbling)
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Post by RDP »

He’d been happy when he saw his father come into the room, though his appearance was rather messy. He figured that Papa and Mama were making him another sibling. Instead he found out that Papa was leaving again.

Akkkk! Wicked! This is so...sad! Trowa is being taken away to be 'interrogated' (probrably tortured), and his poor children! I feel bad for Lena too -sniff- Her words and Trowa's song were very moving. Keep going, Wicked!
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