Burned
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Eienvine
- Fanfic demi-god(dess)|Fanfic demi-god|Fanfic demi-goddess
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Oh my gosh, that's so tragic! It was Duo . . . so tragic . . . so well written. It was so descriptive and yet so succinct- the perfect length for a fic like that. Awesome job.
- I always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific.
- Jane Wagner
Life is hard. After all, it kills you.
- Katherine Hepburn
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Caliborn
- Naughty Songstress of BI
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Oh wow... this was really wonderfully written. I felt my skin burning along with Relena's at the vivid descriptions. Although this was a wonderful short story, may I add my request to the others for a sequel? The last few lines gave the fic a somewhat unfinished feel.. but then again, that does seem like Japanese style. It's your choice, of course, but I would love to see additions to this great short fic.
One day, we will all look back on this moment, laugh nervously and change the subject.
-Annonymous
I want to live forever or die in the attempt.
-Annonymous
~Temptress Goddess of Vengeance
~CEO of the Hentai Charity League
"Puppy McPup?"
"For G**sakes, no!"
Andrea is the most beautiful, amazing sister on earth... when she's not being a meanie.
-Annonymous
I want to live forever or die in the attempt.
-Annonymous
~Temptress Goddess of Vengeance
~CEO of the Hentai Charity League
"Puppy McPup?"
"For G**sakes, no!"
Andrea is the most beautiful, amazing sister on earth... when she's not being a meanie.