Amour 5/? (lemon)

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Lady Casper
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Post by Lady Casper »

Wow, you did it again! This is great. It seems like Heero is showing more to Relena now then he actually realizes. Great work, Zapenstap! ^.^ I love how this turning out indeed. I haven't seen many written like this, probably due to the fact that you have these guys so in character that it can make you have to wonder if the two will actually end up together or if something else will prevent them from being together as the many numerous things Heero had said were the reasons.

Great! Please continue this. :D
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Post by star fighter »

:eek: :eek: :eek: Perfect. That's all I have to say. You really know how

to write Heero and Relena. I'll be looking forward to the next

chapter :bounce:
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Post by NafX »

You have to love Heero ... *laughs*
He's so clueless ! :)
He doesn't understand this love business and assumes he'd know if he was afflicted with it ... *laughs* ... poor ignorant fool ... ;)

I love your portrayal of them both, so very true to character I think ...
I enjoy your writing so much ... you're really rather good at it aren't you? ;)

Speaking of which ... you busily working on your other projects too ... ?
I miss FMS ... it's my fav ... although this has got to be up there running a close second ...

Anyhow ... excellent work as always ...
Keep it coming ... :)

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Post by lilac310 »

The story is getting better and better....especially the "lemon scene" too as you decided to somehow make your own version of the 'dominatrix' style.....hahaha....

YAY!!!..It seems like Heero's getting SOMEWHAT close to realizing that what he's feeling for Relena is LOVE....at least he said that he didn't want to die....that sure sparked some hope whether he was referring to Relena or to something else, the important thing is that there's "something" he is looking forward to.....

..haha..Anyways, I just had this CRAZY idea...not to be intruding or anything..but what if Heero went on the mission and found another girl he 'liked' and actually decided to engage in a stereotypical 'girlfriend/boyfriend' relationship for whatever reason...lol...MORE DRAMA!!!....then, Relena finds out and breaks down :eek: ....

...anyways, so much for that wishful-thinking....just keep it up, keep writing...and don't overwork yourself in writing fics....relax, take a break, and after you do..your brain's gonna be recharged full of more amazing ideas just like this chappie!!!...ta-da
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Post by matisleonhart »

shut up, don't give her any ideas, Zap, it fine just the way it is, great
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Post by MindLezz »

This story is absolutely wonderful!

I find myself reading it over and over again, (with and without the lemon).

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Post by star fighter »

Still waiting for next chapter :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
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Post by zapenstap »

Sorry. Student Teaching. I'll write and post when I can! *most sincerely* Z
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Post by Kari »

Intense. Great .Terrific. :lol: :lol:
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Post by inukikyo »

I know why he does it but I hate that he does it and I wish she would wake up and kiss the hell out of him so hed lose control just long enough to say those three little words we all know hes feeling.

Holly
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