Unknown Ninja Girl!

Uzumaki Naruto, considered the least talented of his class, has finally graduated on his fourth attempt to become a Shinobi. Along with his two teammates, Haruno Sakura, the girl he has a crush on, and Uchiha Sasuke, his rival and prodigy of their class, he begins an adventure to grow stronger in order to become the next Hokage

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Unknown Ninja Girl!

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This is my frist fanfic.. so I don't know if you all will like it or not..

Disclaimer: I don?t own Naruto


Attention: This is when Sasuke comes back from Orochimaru after 2 1/2 years had pass

Chapter One: The Mission

Summary: A ninja who is a missing nin by many villages, because of her strength. The only thing they know is that its from a village called 'Konoha', Those villages will do anything it takes to get that ninja. But every time they send some spies ------ it always ends up being dead, Little did the young ninja not know is that she's also wanted by the Akatsuki.

what will happen to her if she did really get capture??

Chapter One Summary: Team 7 was assign on a mission, a special mission by the 5th Hokage who is called Tsunade.


?Kakashi, I am assigning you and your team on a very big mission. Your mission is to Guide the Hidden Mist Tsuchikage's son while he is heading back. Make sure he gets there safe.? Said 5th Hokage.

?Yes . . . ? said Kakashi ? and with that he left.

???????????

meanwhile

?AHHHH . . . Kakashi-sensei is late again!? Naruto yelled out on top of his lungs.

?Naruto, you?re so loud!? Sakura yelled back at him, while sitting down on a brown wooden bench.

?How lame. Kakashi-sensei always tells us not to be late. But he?s the one that is always late.? Said Sasuke in an annoying voice.

After it seems like FOREVER, Kakashi finally came to the Team 7 Area meeting.

?Sorry for being late. I ran into some trouble while coming here.? Said Kakashi

?LAIR!!!!!? Yelled both of Naruto and Sakura who are pointing at him.

?Okay. Okay. You two got me, I was late because I was talking to the 5th Hokage and she assigned us on a mission.? Said Kakashi putting his left hand behind his white hair.

?What is it, Kakashi-sensei?? Asked Sasuke closing his eyes.

?Well . . . All we go to do is to guide the Hidden Mist Tsuchikage's son. And make sure he gets there safe, that?s all.? Replied Kakashi

?HUH!!! How lame . . . if he was, the Hidden Mist Tsuchikage's son isn?t he supposed to be really strong?? asked Naruto.

?Umm . . . he is strong, but not too strong I guess. But he is wanted by some ninjas.? Said Kakashi ?while reading his orange book.

?What? Wanted?? Asked Sakura standing up

?yes.? replied Kakashi

?but why??

?Don?t know. Well lets get going Team 7.?said Kakashi

?yeah . . .?said all three of them

~**~**~

... [ Konoha Gate ] . . .

?Com?n lets get going. The faster we go the better we?ll get home.? Said a boy in a white T-shirt, navy short pants, and a navy vest over the white T-shirt.

?Don?t rush, besides what?s your name?? Asked Kakashi

?Tasuki . . . ? He replied

?Well . . . Tasuki, Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke lets get going.? Said Kakashi.


While all of them were heading to the Hidden Mist Village, Someone was following them

???????????.


... [ Hidden Mist Village ] . . .

?Well, were here. You guys can go back to Konoha now.? Said Tasuki

The Hidden Falls village was surrounded by water, like an island. Every house color was crimson, and on every house there are signs that writes the owners house. If you look to your left, you?ll see a giant tree that is planted in the deep water. And to your right there you see a
Palace ----- and guess whose house it belongs to. Correct the Hidden Mist Tsuchikage's family.

?I think, we?re going to stay and eat some food here.? Said Kakashi

?yeah.. Yeah.. Since it was a pretty long journey too.? Naruto added on

?Well...? Tasuki was interrupted by the alarm.

?Attention everyone, we have some intruders! Families please lock all your windows and doors! All the Chuunin, Genin and Jounin please report to your position to attack!?

........................

so how do you guys like it?? there'll be more

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Post by viceleah »

hey that's so interesting... are you gonna make a chapter two or something like it...? reminds me of when they went to help the guy with the sacred water....

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viceleah wrote:hey that's so interesting... are you gonna make a chapter two or something like it...? reminds me of when they went to help the guy with the sacred water....
yeah its was supposely to be hidden village of the falls but couldn't get enough information about them.. so i picked the mist instead.. but yeah chapter two is coming up.. just got done writing it.. i''ll put it up maybe tonight

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ffgirl_07 wrote:
viceleah wrote:hey that's so interesting... are you gonna make a chapter two or something like it...? reminds me of when they went to help the guy with the sacred water....
yeah its was supposely to be hidden village of the falls but couldn't get enough information about them.. so i picked the mist instead.. but yeah chapter two is coming up.. just got done writing it.. i''ll put it up maybe tonight
great... can't wait...

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Chapter Two: Intruders

chap. two Summary: So the Intruders came . . . and who do they want? While fighting another came but this one was different

"Intruders . . . I guess we have no choice but to stay Kakashi-sensei? Said Sasuke.
?NO! Not Good!? Tasuki yelled out of the blue.
?Tasuki what?s going on? Why are you wanted by some ninjas? Also what do they want with you?? Asked Sakura.
?You see, I?m the only one who can enter the Hidden Mist Ruins for the Holy Water. So, you see without me no one I mean no one cannot enter it.? Tasuki answered Sakura?s questions
?Holy Water?? Said Naruto in a confusing face expression
?Yes, that water can be increases your charkas 10 times greater. But without me they can?t get in.?
?Heads up everyone, there coming.? Sasuke interrupted them
?Oh! It?s the Sound Ninjas that are after you.?Said Kakashi in a very calm voice.

Four Sound ninjas came down from the sky and are now facing Team 7 and Tasuki in a fighting position.

?Oh Tasuki, why won?t you come with us.?
?No way! Tibin.?
?Haha. . . . Still, remember me, Ouka, Nakasu, Reni and Aero.? Said Tibin.
?Came here to get me again huh? This is your 5th time. !?
?Haha, you think we?re going to fail this time, since now that you?re surrounded.?

All of them looked around and saw that a bunch of Sound ninjas was around them, They were about 30 of them that were surrounding them.

?How clever . . . ? said Sasuke with a grin
?I can use my new technique on them.? Said Naruto getting in a fighting position.
?Sakura, be careful these ninjas are quite strong.? Said Kakashi moving his head protector to reveal his left eye ? sharingan.
?Yeah, I?ll be careful don?t worry.? She replied back.
?Tasuki, you too should be careful.?
?Yeah I know.?

Within 10 seconds everyone started to battle the enemies around them, as the numbers of the sound ninjas go down the more their chakaras were getting low.

?Kakashi-sensei, there?s just too many of them.? Said Sasuke while fighting and using his sharingan
?I know, I think we?re all getting low on our chakras.? Said Kakashi
?AHHH.?
?Sakura!? yelled Naruto, then you run toward her.

Five sound ninjas were surrounding her, as they run toward her five poison needles suddenly came flying out of no where and hit straight into the five sound ninjas in their right shoulder.

?Where did that come from?? ask #1 sound ninja
?It can?t be that pink-headed girl that did it right?? said #2 sound ninja
?Then who did it?? ask #3 sound ninja

Again it hit the five sound ninjas, but this time it was kunais and it hit them straight on the left shoulder.

?What??
?AGAIN!??
?Whom did it? Since it?s not that girl that is in front of us.?
?It?s me!? yell a ninja.

The five sound ninjas and Sakura look up at the nearest house next to them. There they saw a ninja in a black outfit standing what shock Sakura was that it was wearing a Konoha head protector.

?who is that ninja? And it has the same head protector, like me.?

?COME DOWN HERE!? shouted #4 sound ninja.
?No way, am I going down there. Besides I don?t need too anyway.?
?Haha! A ninja is scare what a BITCH!?
?What did you say?? she yells out in a mad tone, no one realizes that her eyes color change into purple.
?I said B ? I ? T? C ? H!?
?You?ll regret for calling me that, you stupid SHIT!.?
She said flying down to help Sakura fight with them.
?Hey, the girl in the pink hair get out of here and help your friends. I?ll take care of this.?
?But . . . ?
?Just go!?
?Okay.? Said Sakura running toward Naruto

?Sakura, you alright?? ask Naruto
?Yeah.? Was all she replied to him with a grin.
?Who is that ninja, that help you??
?I don?t know but it seems strong to me.?
?Come on we don?t have time lets help the others.?


Chapter Three: Intruders 2

When Naruto and Sakura left they ran towards Sasuke. But by the time they got there he?d already finish off the fight with the Sound ninjas.

?You got all of them?? asked Naruto
?Yeah, not let?s go to Kakashi and Tasuki? he answered back

While running there they saw Tasuki on the ground wounded, but Kakashi was still standing up and still fighting.

?Kakashi-sensei!? yelled Sakura
?You guys don?t come any closer. These ninja?s levels are too high for you three. Get out now and take Tasuki with you.. RUN!? Kakashi yelled back
?Ha-ha, I won?t let you all get away.? Said Reni
?Surround THEM!? yelled Ouka --- with that the four sound ninjas surrounded them.
?What should we do?? asked sakura
?Then only thing we can do is to fight with all you got.? Kakashi replied back to her.

Before anyone can start to fight a black ninja jumped in the circle?

?It?s you again who helped me.? Said Sakura
?No need to thank me.?
?You?re wearing the Konoha Head protector.. Are you one of us?? asked Sasuke
?Of course I am? if I wasn?t then why would I help your friend?
?But the 5th Hokage never told me that she?ll send a back up team.? Said Kakashi
?Hokage? no one sent me here? I followed you guys.?
?HEY stop your chit-chat and fight.? Said Tibin
?All of you get out of here!!!!? Yelled the black ninja
?But we can?t? you alone can?t defeat them, you?re as short as Sasuke.. You can?t beat them? said Kakashi
?Look you rather stay here and die or you leave it to me and live??
?You alone can?t fight us.? Said Nakaru
?Was I talking to you? I don?t think so.. you know what? Never underestimate the Konoha ninjas. Go since you guys have low chakras.. HEY you stinking Sound ninjas let them go and fight me!? Said the black ninja
?Talking big huh? Alright we?ll do what you said.. after we?re done with you, we?ll deal with them?? said Aero ? Aero command his allies to make way for Team 7 and Tasuki to run and fight the black ninja.
?NOW ITS TIME FOR YOU TO DIE!? yelled Aero
?I don?t think so.. I think its going to be the other way around..?

Mean While

?Kakashi-sensei, do you think its right for us just to let that ninja fight alone?? asked Naruto
?All we have to do is Believe in that brave ninja.? Said Kakashi
When all of them got to the other side of the bridge they turned back and look at the fight.
?That ninja sure is fast?.? Said Tasuki

KUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Blood coming out landing to the ground and the 6 ninja?s faces. All of sudden 4 ninjas collapse on the ground ?
?How can that be?. One attack from a thin sword killed us all?: said Aero and closed his eyes
?I told you never underestimate us?? said the ninja then flew to where Team 7 and Tasuki were all resting.
?Got all the stuff done.. no need to thank me.?
?Thank you every much.. may I ask for your name.? Said Kakashi
?That?s none of your business.? Said the ninja in a cold way ? after that she took off
?Kakshi-sensei, did you see that? I mean did that ninja really killed them in one single attack? Said Naruto
?yes.. it did?
?Kakshi-sensei what I don?t get is that the ninja was wearing the konoha head protector. But what it really gets me is that I never that ninja before.? Said Sakura
?Correct. I?ll go talk to the 5th Hokage (TSUNADE) about this, now let?s repair the town.?


hope you all like it

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Post by viceleah »

my eyes was so burry that i can't really see but that was interesting... i WANNA know who she is... ahhhhhhh.... can't wait but will have to.... grrr...

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you'll find out.. i'm putting the next chapter tonight

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