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Post by kmblue »

Title: Moments
Author: Kendra
Pairing: 1xR
Rating: G
Warnings: Fluff
Disclaimer: I don't own GW.
Notes: I'm taking a break from the HP week of smut to write this for Leia Avenrose, the best damn beta reader on earth. :D



Most of the time that they were together they weren't alone.

She was now the Foreign Minister to the ESUN and he was her head of security, a special position of the Preventers. There were always something to do; appearances to make and people to meet. Relena was in demand and he had to protect her.

He didn't mind it as much as he used to. When he first took the job, he was hesitant because in an average week, Relena took at least one trip to one of the Colonies, went all over the Earth, and worked an average of 15 hours per day. The first thing he did was cut the amount of hours she worked to no more than 10. She was working more than him and he was a workaholic.

He loved her and he loved their jobs but he loved the moments like these more. They were lying on their bed; he was lying vertically and she was laying horizontally, her head on his chest. They just laid there, no need to move or do anything else. They didn't need to; they had past the stage where they had to prove their love by make constant gestures and filling every moment with kisses.

Now, they rested knowing that they were loved. It was all that mattered after all.
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Post by LilTrix »

Well written Blue-- in just so many words you were able to keep true to Heero's personality while adding something new as well. I liked the ending alot--I thought that little moment between Heero and Relena was very sweet. Good job.
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Post by Leia Avenrose »

*showers you with praise and love*! :) I loved it, it was adorable, short and sweet, so adorable. It urges me to keep writing. :) *glomp* Can't wait for more little snippets and long chapters to slip into my inbox! <33
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Post by perfectpeach »

TT_TT ah, its moments like those that make me rethink my revenge-on-male-kind holocaust.
maybe another would make me stop *nudge nudge* :wink:

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Post by Morrighan »

Ooohhh!!!! How sweet! I think it's wonderfully in character; it's amazing how much can be said without dialogue. :D

Great job, kmblue! :)
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Post by Lady Casper »

I love this kendra. It definately holds a lot of showing of their relationship without making it longwinded. Awesome as always.
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Post by takisha16 »

AWWWW VERY CUTE! *_*
I liked how you pointed out that they were so far off in their relationship and so in love that physical touch was not a must for it to be alive!
I liked how you also showed Heero's obsession with taking care of Relena and that scene with her head on his lap is absolutely adorable!
Nice job! :wink:

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Post by Andrea »

Cute! I liked the shortness of it- you managed to capture so much love and tenderness in such small words.

Lovely, Kendra!

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Post by kawaiiemogirl »

Awww, how sweet. Not too long, not too short.
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