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Hot snot

Post by tangelo »

a villianelle
(screw iambic pentameter)




Hot Snot

When you prove me wrong, you think you?re hot snot
with your research and sources and web links at hand.
You?re just cold boogers, I say, and you?re not

Today?s Einstein or Freud, though you thought
your tricks would all leave me dumb ala ? kazammed.
When you prove me wrong, you think you?re hot snot,

And leave me so mad I just want you to rot!
I?ve tried to fight back, to prove I?m right and
?You?re just cold boogers,? I say, but you?re not

paying any attention to me ? I caught
Your look away, bored, or confused at my stand.
When you prove me wrong, you think you?re hot snot?

And ugh! This frustration! Like always we?ve fought,
You argue much better, your words come as planned.
You?re just cold boogers, I say, but you?re not

the one needs to be humbled ? you?re all I?ve got
keeping brainy me?s ego from getting too grand.
You prove me wrong and you think you?re hot snot,
You?re just cold boogers, I say? (though you?re not).



alas, mea culpa

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Post by Mellie »

hehe, that had a fun little rhythm too it. I liked the words behind the words. It was another enjoyable read. Keep it up!

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