(R) How can it be

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(R) How can it be

Post by tangelo »

99 words (drabble), R for language

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Oh fuck, not again.

this silent, dark home

glass cracks under each step as I feel my way through the kitchen.
They love each other. Idiots.

Shit. My shin finds a chair too fast and palms hit the floor hard. Spilled scotch burns
my glittering hands.

I stay kneeling, head hung.
I can deal with this until I?m the problem. But now?

I lie down with a faltering crackle. Maybe tomorrow I?ll wake up
or let them kill each other, that?s their business

Just don?t blame me, this isn?t my fault
for being born, don?t blame me

it?s not my fault



is it?
Last edited by tangelo on Mon Apr 04, 2005 8:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by Mellie »

Oh my! What an emotional punch this packed. Excellent job with the flow.

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Post by tangelo »

wow, you review fast!

and thanks a lot

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Post by Mellie »

hehehe, I do tend to do that. read quick, write quick, bam. But I really did like the dark tone of the drabble. Keep it up ^_~

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