Gundam Wing: Waltz Remix Preview (NC-17)

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Post by matisleonhart »

I toalltly fogot about those EA pilot being drug enhanced. I was just trying to figure out a way to present there ability to the level of the gundam pilot. you forgot G Gundam (Grizzly Gundam, Mobile Trace System). Thanks for the tech support nut.
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Post by lilac310 »

I think this deserves a reply.....you definitely did a lot of work here in order to come up with these ideas (including the details of how the Gundams would look like)......I'm interested to see how Chapter 1 would turn out to be...Keep it up!
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Post by Wingnut »

Useing the MT system is fine with me. You are certainly not the first author to have a Wing MS use the MT system. Plus the Grizzly is a rather genaric design that can be easily modified into a new model, so no problems there.
I also notice that you did a Liger 0 modification to 3 units by giveing them the various armor unit options. Make sure that said modifications are intagrated into the construction of the mecha so they can not be swapped with each other and it should work all right.
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Post by matisleonhart »

Anybody been playing DMC3, then you'll notice that I the ETU Gundams have the names of bosses from DMC3. Oh, and nut, there are. The three gundams in question were design to do different jobs that would help them when they work as a team, yet on there own still dangerous
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Post by Wingnut »

Then I guess the only thing left to say is: Stick to canon romantic pairings and bring on the first chapter!
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Post by matisleonhart »

thanks. oh did I forget to metion the official theme song of Waltz Remix: White Reflection (Para Para Mix). of coase I had to have a remix for the theme song.
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Post by Raspberry »

matisleonhart wrote:thanks. oh did I forget to metion the official theme song of Waltz Remix: White Reflection (Para Para Mix). of coase I had to have a remix for the theme song.
Ooooh, White Reflection is just AWESOME! :D

Though I haven't heard the remix *confused*

Anyway, speed your actions boy and hurry up with that story! :wink: :lol: 8)
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Post by Stellar-Soldier »

hm... mobile trace systems. Very reminescent of G Gundam. Secondly, the names of the new gundams also are very reminescent to G Gundam's odd ball cadre of 'mobile fighters'. The use of Heavyarms as a mobile suit is also odd, and more or less unrealistic, even in a gundam fanfic. The serpent is more or less a simplified version of Heavyarms, so I guess it could work that way. On a technical level, most of the weapons are basic, nothing I see that catches my eye as completely original. Hopfully the story as well as fight sceens will ballance out the technical stuff.

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