[NC-17, Lemony] Sun and Shadow 1/1

Caliborn · Post by **Caliborn** » Sat Mar 19, 2005 3:49 pm

That was . . . breathtaking, really. Very beautiful . . . You captured the emotions and presented the metaphor so well . . .

I have to agree with what's already been said. ^_^;; Smarty Cat, you are most definitely the one author I know that can really capture the emotion between those two . . . and you do it so beautifully it almost has to be cannon!

And the ending made me almost want to cry, too. ^_^ She's pregnant . . . It finishes off the metaphor quite nicely, I think . . .

Anyway, all in all, I can't think of an adjective to properly describe this piece except . . .beautiful. ^_^ Thank you for writing it!

kawaiiemogirl · Post by **kawaiiemogirl** » Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:20 pm

This is the best lemon I have ever read. Your story deeply shows Heero's emotions and Relena's as well for each other. Keep up the good work!

Smarty Cat · Post by **Smarty Cat** » Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:30 pm

Raspberry wrote:Lots of really nice things

*blushes* Thank you so much for all of your kind comments! The response I've been getting for this little interlude is absolutely amazing. I never would have thought it would have such an impact on people. I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

Smarty Cat · Post by **Smarty Cat** » Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:33 pm

Lady Casper wrote:Smarty Cat you rock the fanfiction world.

Now if only I could put that on my resume...

I'm glad you liked this little fluffy lemony interlude. Thanks so much for your kind comments.

Smarty Cat · Post by **Smarty Cat** » Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:36 pm

bookworm wrote:*raises glass* Cheers!!!! Great job, Smarty Cat. This was a great and amazing read.

Yay, a toast! To the love between Heero and Relena!

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

Smarty Cat · Post by **Smarty Cat** » Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:38 pm

kawaiiemogirl wrote:This is the best lemon I have ever read. Your story deeply shows Heero's emotions and Relena's as well for each other. Keep up the good work!

Wow. The best lemon you've ever read? That's an amazing compliment. Thank you. I'm glad you thought I did the emotional bond between Heero and Relena justice.

Smarty Cat · Post by **Smarty Cat** » Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:45 pm

Caliborn wrote:Lots of really nice things

Wow, where to begin?

First of all, you can thank Crystaltear for that little pregnancy bit at the very end. She quite nicely pointed out that the first ending was a little abrupt, and I had to agree with her. Upon a second perusal, the whole "sun and shadow meeting and creating something new" just screamed pregnancy. Besides, I think this version is much better. More fluff!

And your comment about capturing the emotion between them and it almost having to be canon... wow. I think that's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me about my writing.

Thank you so much for commenting.

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