Lord and Master Chapter Nine/Ending Revised (rated NC-17)

Katisha888 · Post by **Katisha888** » Sat Mar 19, 2005 10:20 pm

Uhm, who shot Darla? Did Paul shoot Darla, then Relena came in on the scene and she shot Paul, and then she went off (why? coz its single shot gun?) to get another gun, then Heero came in and shot Paul...*shakes head*

Wingnut · Post by **Wingnut** » Sun Mar 20, 2005 5:21 am

Katisha888 wrote:Uhm, who shot Darla? Did Paul shoot Darla, then Relena came in on the scene and she shot Paul, and then she went off (why? coz its single shot gun?) to get another gun, then Heero came in and shot Paul...*shakes head*

Yeah, you lost me on that one. It is safe to say I think that Relena shot Paul in the arm, but who put the round in Darla's head?

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Sun Mar 20, 2005 6:43 am

hmmm....I expect there will be a next chapter right, tear?
Don't make me come over there and MAKE you write mor....wherever 'there' is. :-?
Is there gonna be lemon....? hasn't been a lemon posted in ages.

Raspberry · Post by **Raspberry** » Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:15 am

Oh my God...

This ending was EXCELLENT!

You really showed Relena's strenght and Heero who becomes merciless when somebody threatens Relena!

And the whole story... mravelous!

GREAT JOB!

teardropdangel · Post by **teardropdangel** » Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:38 pm

Thanks ya'll. Sorry about the mix-up. :-? First shot was Paul shooting Darla. Glass shattering, Relena getting spare gun and second shot, Relena shooting Paul in arm.

Katisha888 · Post by **Katisha888** » Mon Mar 21, 2005 5:03 am

Ah okay...I will just guess and say that maybe Paul wanted Darla to be dead in Heero's house. But he is foolish if he thinks he can just get away with something like that unless he was so annoyed with her when he got there.

*shrugs* oh well...
on with the show...thanks for clearing it up!

sweet_me_beajai · Post by **sweet_me_beajai** » Thu Mar 24, 2005 7:45 am

is that it?! or are there more coming up?!

i need more!!! please!!!

teardropdangel · Post by **teardropdangel** » Thu Mar 24, 2005 11:33 pm

Nope, no more. I've run right out of inspiration for this fic. :-?
On the bright side, I am working on a one-shot. ^^

sweet_me_beajai · Post by **sweet_me_beajai** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 4:50 am

shoot!! the ending could have been a bit longer...

well, atleast they end up together...

great job! can't wait for that one-shot

teardropdangel · Post by **teardropdangel** » Fri Mar 25, 2005 10:03 pm

Thanks. ^^. I'll just sweet talk my muse into working with me on the new one-shot. :-?

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Lord and Master Chapter Nine/Ending Revised (rated NC-17)

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