Relena [poetry]

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:03 pm

A/N: I realized I posted this in the OT forum but not here. Nothing too special, I'm just in a sappy mood.

"RELENA"
~~~

She always has some grand scheme inside her head, always some story or song and if I'm lucky, catch the refrain under her breath as she's doing some rare household task and bustling around with a basket of paperwork balanced on her hands.

She hums when she thinks I can't hear.

She always has to be doing something for others or is planning to. Writing articles, joining groups, wanting to organize an event that will help others. She's not the only one, she shares the taskload with others and often has to be told when it's time to stop. But she likes that.

She cries when she's sad, when she thinks that there's nothing else to believe in and leaves the curtains open to a bleak-looking day. Hiding tissues in her pockets, she doesn't want to be seen with weary eyes, because nobody is allowed to see her when she's sad.

And she laughs when she's happy, when there's so much joy in her heart it feels it wants to burst, so her mouth quirks up and the sound of deep, pure sunshine escapes her lips and reaches her sparkling eyes, always those eyes.

She's many things that I do not know about her, things of her past that are too wonderful or too hurtful to talk about. They're there when she reaches for my hand, when she listens to what I say, when she puts two fingers to her lips, smiles, then presses them to mine and whispers,

"Sweetheart."

So many things that I wish to never take for granted.

She's the thing that -

The person who can just -

Be -

- how can you explain, how can I explain this -

The one who turns to me to say,

"Someday."

It will come.

Someday.

Mellie · Post by **Mellie** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 5:57 pm

Oh! The emotions were so tender! I loved that it was in Heero's voice! It made it all the more real and poignant. Very well done Calla!

Andrea · Post by **Andrea** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 6:54 pm

Lu, that was so emotional, it's real; his emotions, his confusion, his frustration at not being able to describe or explain himself... It made the whole story a lot more sweet. It was so short and simple, but yet it was packed with so much love and tenderness it made me want to melt.

Once again, lovie, your writing style is amazing and very human. Loved it.

Morrighan · Post by **Morrighan** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 8:56 pm

Ooh... I love the voice!

Excellent job, Lu!

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 1:13 am

Ack, thank for your replies Mellie, Andrea, and Morri. I'm always happy to hear your thoughts regarding fics, it always makes my day better.

lilac310 · Post by **lilac310** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:50 am

amazing...it sounds like slum poetry...you know, the ones that are free-formed...more like an essay but there's some sort of rhythm to it.....anyways, keep it up!

Eienvine · Post by **Eienvine** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:11 pm

Oh, Calla, I love you. That was just . . . perfect. Just sweet and simple and thoughtful and perfect. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Calla Lily · Post by **Calla Lily** » Sat Mar 19, 2005 2:22 pm

*lol* Hee! You all just make me giddy with your awesome comments.

kawaiiemogirl · Post by **kawaiiemogirl** » Sat Mar 19, 2005 4:00 pm

Aww, the story is so sweet, best of all it came from Heero.

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