Autumn Days (1)

[suicide_baka]

Well this is the first time I wrote something like this so...here it goes.


It was a cool, autumn day in the month of October. The leaves had already turned color and were starting to fall to the ground. The sounds of the leaves crunching under every step that Heero took filled the air. He dug his hands in his pockets to keep them warm. It may have been cool but the wind would make your spine chill.

He stopped in front of the huge high school building. Seniors were running around making fun of the freshmen while the some kids snuck to the back of the buiding to relieve themselves for they probably had a test later on in the day. Girls walked by holding their books close to their chest while they looked at him and giggled. He had to admit, he was a fine, attractive sixteen year old.

The sound of the school bell filled the air as students started making their way to their classrooms. He took in a deep breath and sighed.

"Damn."

He walked down the hall quietly while others observed him from their lockers. Girls gossibed to each other in their ears as boys walked towards their girlfriends to remind them that they were there. Heero made no contact to anyone but he did watch them from the corner of his eye. Even in his school uniform, it made girls knees go weak. He finally reached his first class, world history. What a great way to start of the day. He knocked on the door to show that he was about to come in. He slowly opened the door with his books in hands. The students suddenly went quiet as he walked to the center of the room, he brought his head up too acknowledge them.

"Ah you must be the new student. I'm Mrs. Wang" said an old lady who walked up to him. He was surprised that she was still standing by the way she looked.

"Class, this is.."

"Heero Yuy, pleasure." He said.

The teacher nodded. "He came from L-1."

There were some 'wow's' said amongst the students.

He knew right away that this was going to be one hell of a day.


Heero walked out of the school after the sound of freedom rang. He headed straight for the school housing areas to get away from this prison.
He cursed his parents in his head for sending him down here in the first place.

"But Heero honey. We want you have a better education down on Earth."

"I hate the idea."

"I'm sure you'll find some good friends down there son unlike the ones you have now."

Heero glared at his father.

"Sending you down to Earth is for the best. That way you won't get into trouble."

Heero walked out of the room slamming the door making the Family Portrait fall down.

"This is a bunch of bullshit." he muttered to himself.

He walked through the glass doors and up the stairs to his room. He was just about to open it when he heard giggling from inside. He blinked once and looked confused. He was sure this was his room, but he asked for no room mates, but that giggling sound sounded like a..girl.

He knocked on the door and he heard scrambling.

"Yea?" Was his reasponse.

He opened the door and walked in to find a guy lying down on the bed. He had a long, chestnut, braided hair. He looked all relaxed until he saw who it was.

"Hilde you can come out now. It's just some new kid." He said as if he didn't care.

A blued, short haired girl walked out of the closet. She was turning red like crazy.

"Sorry...It's not that I..hey..your the new kid from History aren't you? Well i'm Hilde."

Heero didn't say anything and glared at them both.

"Who are you and what are you doing in my room?"

The braided boy got up from the bed and kissed the girl on the cheek.

"I'll see you later."

The girl walked out of the room as fast as she could. The braided boy stuck his hand out to Heero.

"Hi. I'm Duo Maxwell."

"Get out."

"What?"

"Get. Out. I asked for a room for just me."

Duo smiled. "Didn't they tell you? There wasn't anymore rooms so they had you share with me."

Heero glared even more but just went over to the vacant bed and sat down. Duo came over and sat next to him.

"You still haven't told me your name."

Heero actually moved his head this time and felt it crack. Boy he had to turn his neck more often.

"Heero..Heero Yuy."

Duo slapped him on the back.

"This is going to be cool. Just you and me as room buddy's."

"Hmph."


Heero and Duo walked around the school playing fields since Duo insisted.

"And over here we have the football team." Duo pointed to the guys who were throwing each other into the dirt and laughing.

Heero wasn't paying attention at anything that Duo was talking about. He had his eye on a certain blonde, blue eyed girl.

"Hey earth to Heero." said Duo as he waved his hand infront of his face.

He looked over to where Heero was staring and laughed.

"Duo, who's that?"

"That my friend is the the goddess of the school. That is Relena Dorlain."

Heero couldn't help but let his mouth fall down as he stared at the girl who was practicing a cheer. He guessed that she was the captain of the cheerleading team.

"Don't get your hopes up."

Heero shook his head. "What are talking about?"

"I see the way you are looking at her but she is way out of bounderies."

"Why?"

Just then a football player ran over to Relena and hugged her giving her a long passionate kiss. The other cheer leaders laughed as Relena playfully hit the football player. Duo just pointed at him.

"That's why. That's Trowa Barton, captian of the football team and might I add, Relena's boyfriend."


Well that wasn't so bad now was it S_B? Yea I guess it was okay.

0.0;;;;; i'm talking to myself!!!

[freelight01]

This sounds like a very interesting story, and in the first chapter alone you have already outline the story to your readers and that takes skill!!! In either case you're a brilliant writer so - PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[suicide_baka]

This sounds like a very interesting story, and in the first chapter alone you have already outline the story to your readers and that takes skill!!! In either case you're a brilliant writer so - PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gee thanks freelight01. No one ever said I was a brilliant writer! Well now i'm not mad about that test that I failed today. lol. *hug the air out of freelight01* thanks!!! I salute you!

[blackrose]

Wow, Trowa the captain of the football team and Rel's boyfriend? *grins* I like it!

Heero: I don't.
Rose: Awwwww, why, cuz you'll have to work harder to get Relena?
Heero: *glares*
Trowa: *smirks and hugs Relena again* Don't count on it, Yuy. Don't count on it.
Heero: *reaches for gun*
Suicide_baka: Sorry, no guns. This is high school.
Heero: DAMMIT!

Yay! Where's part 2?

Love,
Rose

[suicide_baka]

*turns head behind her back and points finger to herself.*
Wow, Rose! You actually commented on my fic! lol. You actually knew I was here? Glad you enjoyed it.
I'll get part 2 up as soon as I can.

Heero: In the mean time, you better fix up everything.
Suicide_baka: Let me work.
Heero: Now!
Suicide_baka: Don't rush me! Your making me think to hard! Ah the pain!
Heero: 0.o;;;;

[Aieki Chan]

Cool, I like it! Like always, I'm a a quoter and a rater, plus writer also and lets see how good your story is. I'm going to ask my judges to rate it with me. Remember, 1 is bad all the way to 6 the great. Judges!

Judge 1: I give it a 5.
Judge 2: No, this story was great! 6 I say, 6!
Judge 3: Hmmm...I say a 5 and a half. Is there?
Kristy: Its my turn?! Okay, I rate it a 7!!! Even though theres no 7, I say your writing is worth one!

[suicide_baka]

Thanx Aieki Chan!
Wow people are actually reading my stories. I"m sooooooooooo happy :razz:
Thanx everyone who read it.

[shadowcat]

Wow!!

I love it!!!
i Love it !!!
I love it!!

what else can i say about it??

** cat

[suicide_baka]

*jumps up and down* So many people are responding that I feel like...peeing in my pants. Its so kewl that it is...scary.

[shadowcat]

hey its a good fic so we love to tell you how we feel about it!!!

Don't getover excited and pee on your pants...not a good look

Keep writting

**cat