Velveteen [NC-17] LEMON

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Velveteen [NC-17] LEMON

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Title: Velveteen
Author: Lady Casper
Rating: NC-17 (Nobody with an underage mind)
Betaed by: Leia Avenrose

Pairing Mir x Sango (My first lemon with this couple)


The crescent moon shone down on the small lake that resided on the outskirts of the village. It reflected numerous images of lights; playing its own little game of ?catch the darkness if you can?. The water rippled from the low lazy willow tree that slouched down to let its branches touch the water, its tentacles skimming along the surface. The old tree seemed older than it actually was, filled with wisdom as it now tried to pass down its knowledge to the lake.

Lying beside the small body of water, a young woman with long dark hair sat at the edge. Her legs were pulled up to her chest while she took in the scenery and also taking in the cold factor of having her younger brother still in the clutches of the devil himself. Her chin rested on the back of her hand, her eyes hooded from not really sitting next to the water but of the thoughts in her mind. Her mouth was set in a tight grimace at the prospect of having her last and only flesh and blood sitting the hands of the puppeteer who had caused their family?s demise.

A cold, but warm softness grazed her shoulder.

Looking up with a little shock and surprise, her eyes caught sight of the monk?s. They glimmered in the moonlight, piercing into her.

Turning her head away, she sighed, ?What is it, Miroku??

He said nothing but sat next to her, never taking his eyes off of her. Turning from the feeling of being burned by his stare, her eyes caught his again, making him turn his head toward the sky.

A little confused, she looked up to where he was gazing.

It was beautiful; the clouds circled around the sphere that glowed. It was almost sparkling like the lake?s water did. A small smile lit her face. She couldn?t help but let the corners of her mouth tug up. It gave her a warm feeling that she was being protected from above by such a beautiful glowing moon.

An intimate touch let escape a gasp from her lips, and she suddenly found herself lying in his lap, her dark eyes wide with surprise.

His lips then came down on hers.

She wanted to take her hand and smack his face as she always did when he pulled something like this, but instead her hand came up to the back of his head, pulling him down further, deepening the kiss.

What was he doing? What was she doing?

His hands slid up her legs that were lying over his lap. Her bottom sat in the center of his crossed legs. His hand cupped her waist, while his other kept her face to his.

She couldn?t breath. She wanted to break the kiss from the sheer irony of not knowing what to do, but on the other hand she wanted to bring her hands to his chest, pull on his clothing and bring him deeper into the touch.

Her body quivered; his hands that were on her waist slowly shifted to her ass. That would have earned him a slap or two, but she merely deepened the kiss, rewarding him.

Letting her lips go, he looked down into her face. Blood had rushed to her cheeks; she blushed red with passion, lust in her dark eyes. She wanted more; she needed it.

He was going to deliver with the same amount that was required and more. Her gaze traveled from his face down to his chin, then settled on his neck.

The flesh stood out; his skin was what she wanted between her lips, biting down with her teeth. Moving her hands to his face, she tilted his head back, her mouth settling on his neckline. Her lips sucked and nipped and his hands smoothed up to her back, then to her ass again. Shifting her weight, he made her legs circle around his waist, made her straddle him..

Her nails dug into his black robes, almost causing a cut wound on his shoulder blade. Her teeth pinched his skin; she could taste him. His had mouth watered that taste. Bringing her head back, he in turn placed the same love bite on her neck; licking and sucking on her collarbone, to the nape of her neck, and all the way back up to her jaw line.

Succinctly, taking her taste in, he wanted more. Covering her mouth with his, he trailed his hand up to her bosom. He took hold of her left breast, foundling it with his palm, pinching the nipple underneath the fabric, making it swell and grow painfully erect.

His own erection was growing harder, longer. He wanted to be in her.

?Sango,? he called to her, breathlessly. He had to ask; he wouldn?t tarnish her virgin body, her purity. Without her consent, he would feel dirty like that man everyone thought he was.

?Yes. Yes, do it,? she answered him. He didn?t need to ask; he knew what he wanted, what they both wanted.

Pulling her kimono down, he exposed her breasts. Their creamy texture enticed him. He grabbed them first, testing out their sensitivity; they shivered, bounced in his hands. He wanted to taste them. Gripping her tightly with his one hand around her waist, he brought his lips to the hardened nipple.

Mouth watering and delectable looking, he took it in his mouth, moving his tongue around, lacing it with his liquid. Her head fell back, her breathing heavier. She let her fingers linger in his hair and, as he bit down lightly on the delicious treat, her fingers tugged at the silken dark strands.

He grunted with the pull of his hair but continued. It edged him on, turning him even hotter. Sango?s hands trailed from his hair, going to his robe knot and began to yank on it until it loosened. She pushed it off, her eyes taking in the full sight of his chest. Her fingers traced the toned abs of his stomach, his lines and old wounds. She landed on an old injury he?d gotten on his upper arm.

That was when he had protected her from the apparition of the bear her and her villagers of demon slayers had slain.

It made a gash almost all around his arm.

Her mind wondered why he did block that hit she would have taken.

Noticing what she was touching, Miroku pulled a little harder on her nipple making her head fall back again from the feel of pleasure he caused. His other hand that was now free from her one breast came down to her lower region. He pulled on the remaining piece of her kimono, pushing it down her legs. Realizing this was going to be a bit difficult to get off sitting, he released her from his mouth.

Pulling her up, she stood on two unsteady legs. Her body still leaning up against his, he pushed the remainder of her clothing around creamy smooth thighs, down slender calves and around her feet. Stepping out, Sango pushed her body up against his, letting his naked chest feel her similar one.

His breathing became ragged.

He could feel her nipples, their erection from his touch; he could feel her heat against his own. He needed her now.

Pulling off the last of his own robes he stood in front of her completely nude. He didn?t turn his head, he didn?t blush. He let her look at him, all of him.

She took the advantage of taking a look at what she was in for. His body was toned, not muscular but enough to make it exciting to see. His manhood stood fully erect; she wanted to take it in her hand and see what would happen.

Getting a little daring, she did just that. He sucked in sharply, closing his eyes, and she smirked. Getting a little firmer, she pushed on him. He grunted with the pleasure. She wanted to do it again and again. Pumping him up and down, she made him cry out until she saw glistening fluid come all over her hand.

Not being able to take it any longer, Miroku grabbed her waist, pulled her next to him, taking her lips between his. She gasped in his mouth. Her hand reached around his waist, pulled him against her again.

?Miroku,? she whispered. Sexual frustration pent up, she wanted to complete one another now.

Without another word, Miroku wanted to make sure she was ready. Sliding a finger into her folds, he pushed deeper, making her moan. She was still a virgin. He had to be careful not to hurt her as much as he possibly could.

Kissing the corner of her mouth, he pushed in and out of her, making her moan loudly and throw her head back in the pleasure taking over her. Her body shook and, bringing her head back up, she began to kiss his lips lazily.

He smirked; they weren?t finished yet. Moving his finger in some more, he then added a second digit, making her womanhood stretch wider. Sango gasped without having enough air when he put his fingers in her. Driving his fingers deep into her, she finally came.

She was wet and ready now.

Pulling out of her, she was still somewhat tight. Taking her languid weight, he placed her on the cool grassy ground and, keeping himself hovered over top of her, kissed her swollen, sweet lips. His fingers curled around her long silken black hair. Mimicking what she had done before, he tugged on it lightly making her eyes open wider. Raising her head up she kissed his mouth, then his cheek, then his nose, his eye, and then the other.

?Sango?? he trailed off. ?This might hurt a bit. I don?t want to hurt you. Just try and follow my lead. If the pain is too much then we don?t have to continue.? His voice was soft, sincere. He wouldn?t if she didn?t want to; he would respect her wishes.

Nodding, she smiled. ?I know it will, Miroku. But I have trust in you.? Kissing his lips once more she gave him the signal, with a nod, that she was ready.

Taking the consent, Miroku slowly sheathed himself inside her folds. A low groan escaped Sango?s lips. Entering her took more than he thought it would. Her virgin walls crushed his cock. His breathing hitched.

His hands balled up in her hair that he held still. He closed his eyes, trying to concentrate on going slowly without breaking her with pain.

Deeper he went until he could feel the tightness wrapping around him completely; this was her virgin barrier. Giving her a look, he thrust into her with one motion. At first all he could see was a bright sensual light then gasped at the tightness holding onto him. His body shook a bit from the tautness of her walls caving in on him.

As his vision began to fade back to reality, he looked down to see her grimace in pain. Letting go of her hair, he brought his hand to her face, stroking it gently.

?It?s alright. It will subside soon, I promise,? he cooed to her, rubbing the nape of her neck.

She only nodded. Her body tensed, her fingers clawed at the skin on his back. Her head pushed back, while her legs wrapped around his waist. Breathing his scent in deeply, she began to calm down. Loosening her legs around his waist, she pulled her nails from his back, giving a sorry look for hurting him.

He kissed her on the shoulder. ?Gomen, Sango. I didn?t mean to hurt you.?

She smiled at him and started rocking against his hips. He met thrusts with his own, making a steady rhythm.

Their breathing grew ragged, their hearts ramming against their chests, their bodies becoming one. She came first, flowing with juices of her womanhood. Her scream echoed into the night, his name being heard by the moon.

He was feeling the start of his own climax. His thrusts becoming harder and rougher, she didn?t mind; she met each one he threw at her. Their bodies met each thrust harder and harder, desperate to meet on the edge and jump together.

Her body lifted off the ground, her back arching higher into him. She felt it coming. She knew she was near. Telling him so, he flipped her on top of him. She straddled him, making him go even deeper into her. Her body shook; she could feel all her muscles tighten. Her stomach was on fire as much as her lower region was.

Sweat beaded on their cream skin; the smell of their lovemaking increased, as their bodies continued to move against each other. Blood mingled with his cum along the inside of her thighs.

Her body writhed above his.

Picking herself up until the tip of his erection was almost completely out of her, she fell back down with all her weight, making their mouths open and their breathing lost. She picked herself up and did it again and again.

Finally, they both cried out each other?s names as they came. Filling her completely with his semen, Miroku rubbed her thighs.

Gasping for air, she fell against him in a heap of sweaty, shimmering skin. Her hair fell onto his chest making it tickle his soft spot on his right breast. Getting their bearings together from their orgasms, Miroku moved her upward and then picked her off of him and let his body go above hers.

Moving lower, he started to lick what was their combined mixture. Even sucking up some of the blood, and began to trace the lips of her vagina with his fingers. She moaned, and a small smile crossed his face. Taking his time, he stuck a finger inside her again. He moved it in and out, and she began to meet the thrusts of his finger.

Satisfied by her reaction, Miroku kissed her lower lips and took the left lip into his mouth. Nipping it like he had her neck, she moved against his lips. Her body glowing from the last orgasm, she could still feel another one burn up inside her center.

?Mi..roku?Oh, Gods!? she kept chanting. Lapping at her, Miroku boldly stuck his tongue inside. Sango arched her back up again, her arms swinging out at her sides, her hands searching for something to grip. She grabbed the grass, pulling large chunks of it out.

He kept at his work, sucking up all her fluid, and then finally she came again. It rushed against his mouth. Pulling his lips away from her center, his cock now harder than it was before, he entered her again. He thrust inside her, grinding his hips against hers.

Once again, another mind numbing orgasm gave way. It shook both their bodies. Miroku collapsed on Sango, his head cushioned against her breasts. Her chest heaved up and down, her heartbeat lulling him to sleep.

?Sango...? he called to her, trying to get something off his chest before he fell asleep.

?Hmm??

?I love you, Sango. With all my heart.?

She smiled. ?I love you, too, Miroku.?

Nuzzling his face into her neck, he kissed her skin once more before falling asleep. But before he could do that, he realized he was still connected to Sango intimately. Trying to pull himself out, he was captured by Sango?s folds.

Looking up he could see she was still wide-awake and ready to go again.

This was going to be one night he wouldn?t forget.

The moon watched overhead; watching, as they made love over and over again.

~Fin~
Last edited by Lady Casper on Tue Feb 15, 2005 12:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by LilTrix »

Wow...that is the only thing I can say. That story was really hot.
Now I have to go take a long cold shower :wink:
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Post by Ainohikari »

Nice! Finally an free standing Miroku sango lemon! I love it!
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Weeeeeee! :) I loved every minute of it. *_* Wonderful job.
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Post by FuzzyWolf2006 »

I commend you on a job well done...and thanks for reviewing my fics! :bounce:

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Post by Mellie »

Wow! That was very good! It was hot, passionate, and oh boy! It was nice to see a sango/miroku. They seemed very true to character in this piece. Can't wait to see more!

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Post by Lady Casper »

this was actually quite fun to write. =^_^=

Thank you for all your replies. Makes me very happy you liked it.


Now...to make a sequel with hot new spicyness or not...



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