Just finished reading all of the chapters again and I must applaud. You have turned out a great fic.
Odd, I'm a rather gothic type person whith a morbid sense of humor, yet this fic has made me come down with a serious case of the 'fluffy bunny sindrome' for some reason. I like the angst-ish bits as well, but I'm liking the bits that are kinda romantic, too, and that doesn't happen everyday. Keep up the good work, and update when you can (soon I hope).
Final Mission Status 7/? by Mizaya and Zapenstap
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This fic is disgusting. Trashy just like Nikita, which it's based off of. The characters' integrities are all mutilated. They're not respectable or respectful. The atmosphere of the story is nothing but arrogant.
Heero's a bastard machine.
Zechs is a pimp--his own sister. That is twisted sick. That's what a thug would do.
Relena's practically turned into a whore and a porn star. The poor thing. How mortifying. All she did was love Heero. I don't think any of her strength shines through. Just desperation and manipulation to and fro.
Noin's a dishrag.
Everyone else is filthy. Watching people they know have sex...vomit-inducing. And profane. This fic would be better placed on an anti-Relena site, what with how everyone treats her and isolates her, and how shallow in character they are-- their personalities have deviated far from the original series' manner of developing their characters, which would have allowed them at least some small measure of decency and respect for privacy.
Just ugly.
Heero's a bastard machine.
Zechs is a pimp--his own sister. That is twisted sick. That's what a thug would do.
Relena's practically turned into a whore and a porn star. The poor thing. How mortifying. All she did was love Heero. I don't think any of her strength shines through. Just desperation and manipulation to and fro.
Noin's a dishrag.
Everyone else is filthy. Watching people they know have sex...vomit-inducing. And profane. This fic would be better placed on an anti-Relena site, what with how everyone treats her and isolates her, and how shallow in character they are-- their personalities have deviated far from the original series' manner of developing their characters, which would have allowed them at least some small measure of decency and respect for privacy.
Just ugly.
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Queen Piloteer of the Commis' Pride in Pink, the
Sex on Wheels

Famous Last Words:
"You Dirty Old Man!" and "Go Fight Win!" and "That's Right Bubbuh, I'm Singin'!"