Final Mission Status 7/? by Mizaya and Zapenstap

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Silenceatemycat
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I just read them all again.

Post by Silenceatemycat »

Just finished reading all of the chapters again and I must applaud. You have turned out a great fic.
Odd, I'm a rather gothic type person whith a morbid sense of humor, yet this fic has made me come down with a serious case of the 'fluffy bunny sindrome' for some reason. I like the angst-ish bits as well, but I'm liking the bits that are kinda romantic, too, and that doesn't happen everyday. Keep up the good work, and update when you can (soon I hope).

AkizukiMeiko
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Post by AkizukiMeiko »

hey I loved all the chapters so far....I was just wondering if Relena will admit to Heero that she can't really stand Dorthy and she gives her a headache....or will she end up caring a child that belongs to Heero.....all in good time right.
later

The Angry Angel
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Post by The Angry Angel »

This fic is disgusting. Trashy just like Nikita, which it's based off of. The characters' integrities are all mutilated. They're not respectable or respectful. The atmosphere of the story is nothing but arrogant.


Heero's a bastard machine.
Zechs is a pimp--his own sister. That is twisted sick. That's what a thug would do.
Relena's practically turned into a whore and a porn star. The poor thing. How mortifying. All she did was love Heero. I don't think any of her strength shines through. Just desperation and manipulation to and fro.
Noin's a dishrag.
Everyone else is filthy. Watching people they know have sex...vomit-inducing. And profane. This fic would be better placed on an anti-Relena site, what with how everyone treats her and isolates her, and how shallow in character they are-- their personalities have deviated far from the original series' manner of developing their characters, which would have allowed them at least some small measure of decency and respect for privacy.

Just ugly.
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relena
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Post by relena »

I love it... When the next chapter... PLEASE!!!! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

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