When All Things You Thought was Right Turned Out to be Wrong

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Iesu
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When All Things You Thought was Right Turned Out to be Wrong

Post by Iesu »

Spur of the moment thingy... yet, yet, yet again...

When All Things You Thought was Right Turned Out to be Wrong

All I know is that I've hurt you
Never did I ever know why
Nor did I ever wish it so
All I wanted was to see you smile
Less all I have ever desired
In your gaze dissolves
Zen must have a sick humor
As all I did only hurt you more
A man is not a man until he has accessed his raw untamed energy and takes pleasure to his capacity to fight and defend himself. Only then can he transform his blind rage into power to commit himself, to handle tensions and to make difficult decisions. Inner security also develops. It is based on his realization that whatever goes wrong, he can get help from his inner resources, from the basic energy of his aggression.

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Mellie
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Post by Mellie »

oh wow, that was realaly good. I enjoyed it. Just wonderful. It was sad and i felt a sense of longing that couldn't be fulfilled. Nice poem.

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Post by LilTrix »

I like it. Maybe because I can relate to this poem right now...
There are some who say
an array of horsemen,
and others of marching men,
and others of ships, is
the most beautiful thing on the dark earth.

I say it is whatever one loves.

~poem by Sappho~


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