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angel222
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Post by angel222 »

Last moments

Truth behind deep blue eyes
the twisted certainty to cover up
a thousand lies

Honesty inside crystal tears
the whisper of broken promises
and undying fear

Comfort within every breath
for it carries away warm words
makes me forget

Innocence in bare hands
our reason to exist, slowly slips away
with every chance it gets

Life urge deep inside
uncover the truth
with wide open eyes

Life urge heal the promises
and take away the fear
from inside the shimmering tears

Life urge hold every breath
lock it up as a memory
as if it's the only thing inside

Life urge cherish innocence deep in my heart
In my hands it will wither away
but in my heart, a part will forever stay

Life urge set me free
as you leave my body
as you leave me
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Post by Lady Casper »

I LOVE IT!

Go angel! I love the whole thing. ^___^ YAY! *Glomps*
~Lady Casper ~ Casper 夫人
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Perfect Soldier
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Post by Perfect Soldier »

I really liked this poem of yours, it was easy to identify with and deep inside it gave me a chilling feeling inside my gut, a good feeling though. Something unfamiliar but good at the same time. Thanks so much for sharing it.

Zero
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I'm not afraid of tomorrow,
i'm only scared of myself,
feels like my insides are on fire
and i'm looking through
the eyes of someone else

angel222
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Post by angel222 »

^^ thx you guys *hug*
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