[Poem] Rainbow Walk

[Andrea]

This is a poem I wrote a month or so ago and is dedicated to Wicked as my Xmas gift to her. Hope you all like it!


<center> "Rainbow Walk"

They said she was magical

This girl who so suddenly

Fell into her mother's arms

They said she was born from a tear

Roused voiceless and curious

God's wisdom in her infant eyes

Her mother's love in her baby's touch

On rainbow roads she went to school

Countless stars in the neighborhood

Everyday she went there

Colorful flowers, her best friends

Red for Mondays, blue for Wednesdays

And on Sundays, as her mother left

She talked to those purple lilies

Sitting so quiet on her balcony

On rainbow stops, a new friend she picked

Sometimes yellow, sometimes pink

Sometimes white, and sometimes black

On Tuesdays, at sundown

She would sit quietly by herself

On balcony railings she would lean

Blank notebook and dark ink

Many words, voices and tears

From God's eyes they spilled

The girl's journey, colorful as it was

A traveler's end pass the grass

Pass waters and white gulls

A new journey awaiting

A rainbow path she'll take

New flowers she'll find

Crystalline waters reflecting

Her loving touch and captured tears

The magical girl's path has ended

A new one will arise

From Heaven's ashes, her mother's womb

She'll walk the friendly path

To the horizon, across the ancient rainbow walk</center>

[Mellie]

Wow, that is very melancholy! Or so my interpretation is. This one is a little more vague, but it is still beautiful as you read about the colors and so much more! Thanks for sharing your talent ^_^

[takisha16]

Man what is it with people who can't stop writing excellent poems?!?! jajajja just kidding, it was awesome.
It made me feel as if I was experiencing my whole childhood once again.
I used to be a very lonely girl...who coincidently loved to pick flowers and write!
weird.....
Anyway, I love how you make her flowers, her friends. It totally makes sense. As if she is this child who is above everyone else, or different, but in a good way.
very nice!!!
keep it up.

[Andrea]

It was vague?! Aww! I like this poem... It's my favorite out of the quite few I've written. But thankies, Mellie! It's good to know you liked it even though it was 'vague'.

And Takisha, *laughs* You've just made me laugh so hard! I'm VERY, VERY happy you could identify with it. That's what I'm always going for whenever I write a poem. To have people read it and see themselves in it. Thanks.