Final Mission Status 7/? by Mizaya and Zapenstap

[Akasha]

Aww gee. How long is the next chapter gonna take?

[The Engrish Spy]

I'm soooooooo happy POST AWAY AND GREAT CHAPTER

Engrish

[NafX]

Ooohhhh you guys just made my day ...
This is my favourite story at the moment ... and I have MISSED it!!!
Thanks so much for the update ... it's wonderful ... *happy sigh*

By the way, I'm taking your word for it when you say the next update won't
be 5 months away .... *blinks* ... I'm gonna hold you to that ...

Can't wait, can't wait, can't WAIT !!!!!

~Nat.

[Andrea]

Zap and Mizaya, this was great as usual. I got very happy when I saw you had updated. I understand how life tends to get in the way, so I won't pressure you or make you feel guiltier than you must already feel.

Great chappie, very fast paced. I was bouncing on my seat when Relena planned and executed her vengeance. Yay! *laughs*

I hope Heero confesses his REAL feelings to her in the next chapter, I felt really sad when she almost collapsed at the end of this part. Although, the die-hard fangirl in me BELIEVES Heero was being honest when he said he loved her.

Anyway, excellent work and impeccable teamwork you two carry out. ^^!

Hugs,
Andrea

[Wingnut]

Yeah, but with Heero who the heck really knows?
I know she needed to say what she said, but Heero came to her in a private place, she could've let him say what he came to say first then lay her thing on him.

[Raspberry]

Wow....

and...

WOW!

I completely agree with others - you girls and your story are just the best! You should just see the huge grin I had on my face when I saw there's new chappie of this great story ^^

This part was great as always, but still, a bit depresing - with both Relena and Heero with their heartaches... *sniff* But I loved the part where Duo had to admitt he had similar situation as well No, take back my words: I love whole chapter, and the scene with Hero trying to cuddle Relena in bed was.... priceless

So, once again, great work Zapenstap and Mizaya!

[Morrighan]

Arghhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dammit, Heero!!! *plots to kick him sometime soon*

Can't wait to see more!!

[miz_lou]

Well she was going to make holding off difficult!

miz_lou: Wow, Miss Relena!!
Relena: Well, you can't say that he didn't deserve it...
miz_lou: ok ok, you have a point, but you have been waiting YEARS for this man, and, I promise, he's coming around...be patient! See:

Settled close to Heero with the second carton of Chinese food in her hand and her cheek on his shoulder, she was surprised when he turned to smile at her, almost disarmingly. She had thought her proximity would make him nervous, but he looked?relaxed. He had taken off his shoes and was sitting with both feet flat on the floor facing toward the fire. She was even more surprised when he put an arm around her and kissed her cheek.

Relena: (sputters) But...but...did you read what he DID to me LAST CHAPTER??
miz_lou: (sly) something tells me that he didn't do it unwillingly...you didn't seem to have any complaints last chapter either
Relena: *blushes*

His expression wasn?t very readable, but he seemed to be? considering something.

miz_lou: And you! (points accusingly at an exhausted Heero) Care to explain that segment? (points to quote) and not to me, or Duo, but to RELENA~You've had plenty of time in your charade to know how you feel, now out with it!!

Zapenstap/Mizaya when are we going to know how Heero really feels??

Inching his body up over her torso, his lips found hers, kissing her tenderly, tasting her willingness with his tongue, hands smoothing her hair around her head.

miz_lou: Nevermind, it seems you acted well with a situation not in the script...even continued after Relena said no the first time...
Heero: *sweatdrop* she's on to me

SO RIGHT Stellar-Soldier!! No self-destruct button here

miz_lou: Remember last chapter review?? I told ya piloting a gundam with ease was a different matter
Heero: I still have a gun
miz_lou: A joke! See: this fic is already improving your attitude!

?It?s bad enough doing this mission with that untrained diplomat in the first place without Heero losing his cool because of her misplaced feelings. But fueling office gossip? This is a serious breach of conduct! I thought we were professionals, not old women with nothing better to do!?

?So did I.?

Damn, where did Heero come from
That was so great!! And Duo's repeated rendition~I do believe that if Heero walked in a little earlier, he would have carried out his previous threat to Duo...what fun that would've been!!
Um, *tap tap* excuse me Wufei, who's misplaced feelings? Certainly you would start complaining about Heero's first, not Relena's

She had gotten her revenge in a way, but she was not satisfied.

miz_lou: I warned ya last chapter
Relena: yeah...how about that good cry now?

He looked at her sadly, his face almost seeming to crumple under the weight of her questions. ?That?s not why I came here. I don?t think it?s a good idea to discuss??

?What am I supposed to do?? she asked.

miz_lou: (sharply glaring at Relena) What have I been saying all along about letting the man finish?? He rarely speaks of his own volition, much less comes outta his way to your office to speak...I agree with Wingnut~let the man finish!!
Relena: *looks up with weepy eyes* Everybody's picking on me

It wasn?t until later that she realized with horror that she had compromised the truth..

In revealing to Heero that she couldn?t do the mission without an answer from him, she had told him what the answer had to be. She forced a particular answer from him. She compelled him into saying that he loved her in order for the mission to succeed, which?especially for Heero?it must, whether he truly loved her or not.

miz_lou: (hangs head in defeat) Baka
Relena stomps out crying
miz_lou: (calling after her) But that wasn't why he said it!!! You saw, he hesitated, he didn't ANSWER right away!! He ALWAYS answers promptly regarding a mission!!
(swiftly spins on a heel toward Heero) You're fired
Heero:

Can't wait for the next chapter!
DON'T TAKE DOROTHY'S ADVICE RELENA!
It will only cause heartache...I dunno if I, um, I mean, you, can take anymore

EXCELLENT EXCELLENT Keep it up zapenstap/miyaza! Excellent fic! And I have fun inventing these little, er, long, reviews...it's late Hope someone finds them entertaining
Now, for the much ignored homework

Til next chapter!!
Happy (early) V~Day everyone!

~miz_lou

[Moira Krineii]

Wow! Wow! Wow! ...These characters seem so alive and real reading this story.. the interactions between them is so easy to imagine! PLEASE KEEP GOING!

And can I request a happy ending? I'm a romantic sap.

[Calla Lily]

I shouldn't read stories before attempting to go to bed, I can never get to sleep properly.

Well, with this new update I feel a strange sympathy towards Heero and the situation everyone has put him in, including himself. It was he who was chosen to be Relena's "husband" simply because he was the best choice, but he must have known somewhere along the line that it would become much more complicated.

Relena and Heero are in similar situation (from what I can see) in that they both want to get the 'misson' accomplished to avoid earthly destruction but at the same time they know that they'll have to sacrifice themselves for the cause. Relena wants to succeed but can't continue without knowing the true emotions of Heero. Heero, for some reason, can't tell her what's on his mind and yet his actions are betraying him, unless that's all part of his guise as her 'husband.'

Honestly, in one of the previous chapters when he threatened Duo, that was 'it' for me.

So, to stop me from rambling more about the story, I want to congradulate you both for the wonderful story and for the awesome work that you've put into it!