Kill Our Dreams

[APerfectSoldier87]

I didn't know there was an original fiction place here, that's pretty cool.

Cast me down into my dark hole,
Seal my tombs of regret and pain.
Leave me dead, alone, and fearful,
I have lost it all for a dream.
Shall I have never chased it,
I would have been happy.
The pure warrior's dream,
May it die with me,
Cast it's attributes down to Hades,
Bleed for your causes as I for mine,
Death will leave us shaken, alone,
Forever to be killed again and again.
In a cycle of pain only those,
Those who have fought can ever understand.
On countless battlefields, we die,
For what dream?
Dream's kill us all,
Will we ever reach them?

[Ainohikari]

nice poem.... angsty. Is everything original angsty for some reason?

[teardropdangel]

Very nice...AP87,
Original Angst....I prefer to call it venting...

[Mellie]

I liked that, Joe. It is very angsty and well written. The thoughts were well laid out and it flowed to the last point. It had a different tone than other material that i have read by you, but it was still very good and very you. Great job.