Life at Cinq High~Authors Note and PReview to chapter 16~

[Hitomi Lei]

HI!!





Yes I am alive!!!



First off I?d like to say hat I?m sorry that it?s been so long since I updated. The long and short of the reason for the month long absence is this: the second annual Destiny Contest was announced and I really wanted to enter LACH?but when I re-read some of the early chapters I found that the story was a horrible jumble of grammar and spelling mistakes, not to mention the plot sucked and the characterization was terrible. So I desided to revise the whole thing from beginning to end. The first 12 chapters got the most work and the last two just got minor things changed. So please go back and re-read please! I?m sure you?ll all like it better now.



For those that, for what ever reason, don?t want to go read the fruits of all my labors, here are some things that changed:

The whole uniform thing has taken a lower key in the story, Trowa is introduced earlier, more Heero and Relena scenes, and the things that happen to Relena are more?I don?t know?believable?



The chapters pertaining to the debate have been taken out and two short chapters were combined so that?s why there are now 15 chapters instead of 16.



Now, for your patients here?s a snippet of the next chapter.







Relena heard Heero?s car pull up to her house early Monday morning.



?Milli! Heero?s here to take me to school!?



?I don?t like that kid!?



?Sure you do! I?m going now!? she let the door slam behind her. Out side she was surprised to find not only Heero but Trowa too.



?Hello Trowa, did you think Cathy was here?? She asked the boy as she walked toward Heero?s car.



?Actually, I came to see if you wanted to ride with me.?





There you GO! And here are the URLS for the revised chapters!!!

http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... c.php?t=43 chapters 1-4
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... ?p=226#226 chapter 5
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... ?p=617#617 chapter 6
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... ?p=753#753 chapter 7
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... .php?t=518 chapter 8
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... =1194#1194 chapter 9
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... =1705#1705 chapter 10
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... =1798#1798 chapter 11
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... =2418#2418 chapter 12
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... php?t=1039 chapter 13
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... php?t=1061 chapter 14
http://www.blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/ ... php?t=1254 chapter 15