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Here is where you can find Heero x Relena centric fanfics, like those we archived on our original site. Happy posting!

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WindCloud
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Post by WindCloud »

wowz0rs that was good. Keep up the good job, I don't think ive read anything like this before. Its different, simply magnificant. =D :D

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Post by Andrea »

bookworm wrote:Right now...the atmosphere...

*shakes head*

Well, enough of such deep thoughts.

It was very in-character. I mean, like throughout the story they remained in character. I know that they are somewhat OOC, but the OOC style remained true.

Somehow I don't think I'm making sense. But that's how I see it.

It was deep, that's for sure.
I understand, don't worry. It makes sense. ^^" Deep, I can work with that. Thanks, bookworm.

melrose_stormhaven wrote:Beautiful! For some strange reason, it reminds me of Paolo Cohello's (sp?) Eleven Minutes.

Wonderful story, Andrea. :D
Paulo Coelho? Wow. *bow* That's quite the compliment, Mel, I love his books. Thank you, hon!
teardropdangel wrote:Wow, Andrea. I was toying around with this same plot but you have completely outdone yourself here. *Applauds* :salute:
:salute: Thanks, Teardropdangel.
WindCloud wrote:wowz0rs that was good. Keep up the good job, I don't think ive read anything like this before. Its different, simply magnificant. =D :D
Then I've reached my objectives! Mission accomplished! ... :roll: I'll be quiet. Thank you, WindCloud, 'magnificent' makes me squeal. SQUEE!

*huggles reviewers*
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Post by Morrighan »

Ooh...!!! Andrea! I'm gone from the internet for two days and when I came back, you had this little ficcie! :D :D *is very, very happy*

I LOVED this one. So, so very good. I just love how you developed their characters! :D

*glomp* Great job, sis! :D
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Post by Gundam Girl »

Ooh, kudos to you, Andrea! Definitely a nice, seductive "Memoirs of a Geisha" feel here, even though it's in third-person. I like. *glomps* Congrats on a great fic.
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Post by AnShino »

oh man...that was...great *speechless* :salute: =)
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Post by Oyuki »

wow. very impressive. that was very well written. i salute you. :salute: awesome.
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Andrea
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Post by Andrea »

<b>Morri, GG, Oyuki, AnShino!</b> *squeal!*

Thanks, girls! :bounce:
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