Confused (poem)

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Mellie
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Confused (poem)

Post by Mellie »

I pick up the phone,
But I know not to call.
You are with her,
me not at all.

I picture you and smile,
remembering the days...
days when we laughed
when we talked....

It isn't like I lost you,
More like you can't be here.
But still, I can't help but wonder
Do you think of me too?

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Post by Eienvine »

Great poem! I liked the last line a lot: "Do you think of me too?" Ha ha, I've wondered that more than once in my life. Nice work. Peace out.
  • I always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific.
    - Jane Wagner

    Life is hard. After all, it kills you.
    - Katherine Hepburn

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Post by angel222 »

It isn't like I lost you,
More like you can't be here.
But still, I can't help but wonder
Do you think of me too?
owwww I love that part...great job
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