Naruto: the demon within chap 1

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Naruto: The Demon within


Well here this is my first fan fiction ever hope you guys like it ? if you don?t well nothing much I can do about now can I ???


Disclaimer: naruto is not mind suing me wont get you a single cent the fanfic I writing is just for others to enjoy?.



Author?s note : this story happens in an alternate universe in which naruto attends college as well. He is also a member of the hidden leaf organization ( in place of the hidden leaf village) which hunts demons and other things that go bump in the night.. Without further ado I present you the first chapter?


* = flashback
Italic = thoughts
Bold = kyuubi?s thought


Location : Unknown


Something shifted behind him, he smiles. So that is where you are hiding. Naruto unsheathed his blade, Hellstorm and prepared himself for the enemy to strike suddenly out of nowhere a ragged man in torn clothes rushed out and charged at him. The man was ordinary looking what was terrifying was the demonic aura he was giving off. ?So demon you are going to de-possess the man or do I have to force you??. The man stopped his charge said in an inhumanly deep voice ?you can try but you will not succeed? Naruto simply smile his blue eyes focus on the man, with a quick dash knock the man off his feet with a clothesline (you guys watch WWE right?). Using both palms filled with charka naruto pressed them against the man?s back ?expulsion!? the man fell to the floor as a dark shadow started to ooze out of his body slowly taking the physical form. ?fool now you have allow me to take my physical form hahaha for that I grant you a quick death?. Naruto without any expression brought Hellstorm into a fighting stance.


The demon had finish-taking form and now standing in front of naruto was a powerful rock demon. Naruto with a quick dash disappeared and reappeared behind the rock demon hellstorm slashing a horizontally downward before he retreating a few steps back. ?Not so tough now are we?? naruto said with a smirk on his face, the demon growled angrily made a few hand seals and shouted ?brimstone no justu? with that a solid wall earth wall emerged from the ground and proceed to crush the young ninja with a sickening thud?. However when the wall finally dissolved the demon was shocked to see a wooden log in place of the body. The demon turned around only to get his head sliced cleanly off his neck. Naruto sighs ?why do I bother with this type of low level demons? he muttered under his breath. ?Lets just take that as a final test to complete your training?
With that Jiraiya stepped out of the shadows. Naruto smiled he knew that his power level was way pass Jounin so it was amusing to him that he was going back to the organization to take a chunin exam. Naruto packed his sword and proceeded to walk back to the inn that he and Jiraiya were staying.


On the way Jiraiya decided to started a conversation ?so naruto how do you feel going back to the organization to take the exams?? naruto replied ?piece of cake? but that was when he remembered a certain violet hair girl with pale white eyes. Unknown to Jiraiya naruto?s face became as red as a tomato as he recalled the girl being the only one that really cared for him ?..


*Flashback


Time : 10 years ago

*naruto wanted to join some kids playing after training at the hidden leaf organization when??
?get away from my children you demon?, naruto could only look in sadness as the rest of the children were taken home by their respective parents ?.


*later

(naruto was crying all alone in the play ground)
?why do they all hate me? he sobbed? meanwhile a pale girl with violet hair decided that she had hidden long enough and with that came out to face him ?naruto kun ??.
Naruto spun around in surprise as he felt a hand on his shoulder ? Hinata chan?.


Hinata blushed when she heard the suffix, she sat down beside him and said ?naruto kun don?t care I will be your friend?? with that Naruto looked up his eyes red from all the crying . ?You will ?? he croaked , ?of course I will naruto? and with that she hugged him and that was the start of what was to be a beautiful friendship.

*3 years ago

Naruto was upset ? to tell you the truth he was very upset he was quite a accomplished ninja now and had become strong friends with hinata the thought of having to leave her made his chest heavy but at the same time he was tempted to go train with the pervert sennin. The desire to become stronger was as strong as the desire to stay with his best friend??


Naruto sneaked into the hyuga mansion, hinata was lying on her bed when she heard a tapping sound on her window, she opened the window and naruto hopped in, and she saw a sad look on his face nearly the same as the one at the play ground a few years back.
?Naruto what is wrong?? she asked eyes fill with concern for her crush although she would rather die then admit it to him right now?


Naruto told her about the training, ?Naruto kun I will wait for you, promise me you will come back ??. Naruto grinned his foxy smile and disappeared out of the window. Two hours later he came back and gave her a pendant he broke it into two halves and gave one part to her ?this, he grinned happily would be my promise to you that I will come?. Hinata smiled and hugged him.

*end of flash back


Naruto smiled to himself ignoring what Jiraiya was blabbing about, ?hehe boy would she amazed at how strong I am..?. With that he made his continued the walk back to the inn in anticipation of how the Leaf would accept the dead-last now one of the most powerful demon hunter in the region.


Sorry if the chapter seems very short? I hope I can write longer next time ?. Thank you to all who had review !!!