Is it too soon, Tomorrow?
Can't you come today?
I miss you Tomorrow,
Why did you go away?
Will you be here the next day?
Or were you here last night?
Can you come say hi?
Or do you flee in fright?
Tomorrow is late,
I haven't seen her yet today.
Just that thought makes me weary
And I don't know what to say.
I cry to you, Tomorrow!
Don't leave me here alone!
I'm scared without your hope,
Fear I now moan.
Come back, Tomorrow,
Visit me just right now,
I'll let you go, Tomorrow,
If this one visit you'll allow...
Tomorrow (poem)
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That song popped into my head after reading your poem 
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I liked it because it reminds me of when I was in a relationship with someone and we hardly ever got to see each other. We'd always put everything off till tomorrow...hmmm
It was really good. I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Zero
It was really good. I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Zero
I'm not afraid of tomorrow,
i'm only scared of myself,
feels like my insides are on fire
and i'm looking through
the eyes of someone else
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