another 4xd lemon teaser

[kmblue]

Yeah, another one. I like feedback because I never ever wrote a 4xD lemon and I need to know if its okay.

Kendra


The room was dim, lit only by a couple candles. There were only two occupants in the room, one a man who looked like an incredible fallen angel with his blond hair, bluish-green eyes and incredible tattoo of a crouching tiger on his back. His hair was a little scruffy; it was time for a hair cut. His eyes were keenly watching the occupant of the bed as he stood over her. Her hair was long and blond, her eyes slanted and closed. Her eye brows were weirdly forked and her mouth was open as she shuddered on the bed.

Her eyes opened as she looked at her tormentor. Their eyes met and she felt as if she was drowning in the blue depths of his eyes. His cherubic mouth opened as he motioned towards the bed. He said, "Say it and I'll give it to you, Dorothy."

Dorothy shook her head. She wouldn't give him the pleasure of hearing her voice.

Her eyes followed him as one knee sunk into the side of the bed. He was handsome; despite entering puberty later than the other pilots, Quatre was fully man and he knew his power over her. When they first met, he charmed her with quiet understanding of her feelings and with the warmth she needed. The second time they met, she found herself giving herself to him on his desk.

His eyes locked onto hers as his hand turned her face towards him. He was over her, his body close yet at the same time far away. He licked his lips and he smiled as he felt her shudder underneath him. When he first met Dorothy, all Quatre wanted was to ease the hurt in her heart. She had resisted him then and he was intrigued. The second time, it was pure sexual attraction that led to that scene. He fully expected her to ignore him after it happened, that was Dorothy's character, to pretend that nothing ever happened when it came to the two of them. Quatre made it his mission to break down Dorothy's walls, to break her control. He wanted to see her uninhibited, to see her finally able to let loose. He didn't know that they both had a taste for domination.

[Wingnut]

Gahh! Continue!!!!

[Raspberry]

Oh oh oh oh OH!!!!

More!!!!

Yeah, Wingnut's right!

Continue!

I never expected Quatre to have a tattoo, but it sounds cool!

He didn't know that they both had a taste for domination.

Ah, pricless I say!

[Chibi-sitter]

Tastey appetizer.

*gets knife and fork ready* alrighty when we getting our lemon meal?

[Mellie]

hehe! Your lemons are pure fun...and your teasers pure torture! I like the way you introduced a newer Quatre. So much in such a little piece...can't wait to see it finished!