need info on naruto to write a fanfic

Uzumaki Naruto, considered the least talented of his class, has finally graduated on his fourth attempt to become a Shinobi. Along with his two teammates, Haruno Sakura, the girl he has a crush on, and Uchiha Sasuke, his rival and prodigy of their class, he begins an adventure to grow stronger in order to become the next Hokage

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need info on naruto to write a fanfic

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hi guys well i was excersing one day when i had a very strange idea....

what if naruto was living in the modern times with kyuubi in him and attends school... what if he was a member of a secret ancient organisation that hunts demons and other unholy creatures. what if he has to juggle between hunting demons :) , school and love life ??

i do not noe if you guys would like the idea but i m going to try writing the a AU fanfic on it .. i m starting work on the first chapter soon and will post it as soon as possible

i hope you guys could help me somethings.....
1.) do you think it would be good if i include justus in this modern day fic ???

2.) any pairings you guys want me to write about ??? (naruhina already included)

3.) i know this is stupid but what is the third hokage's name ??? is it sandaime ?? or sumthing like that ???

4.) muz kyuubi be a fox demon ??? demons in general ???

5.) i would like naruto to hav a sword can someone recommend a name and some moves with it ???

well that is all for now give me your comments and advice would be taken into seriously. i m writing a fic for the first time so bear with me.....

anyway i really need help to get this fic off the ground so email me at www.jasx316@hotmail.com if you wanna give me advice (it would be greatly appericated) Also need A BETA READER :)
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I'm not sure about the AU, but to answer some of your questions:

Sandaime means "The Third". His actual name is Sarutobi (A personal name hasn't been given yet.).

I'm going to assume "muz" is "must", and say yes. Kyuubi /is/ the name of the Nine-tails fox, and to make it something else would mean it wouldn't be Kyuubi anymore. ;)
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1) yes

2)NaruHina alone is fine; don't overdo it on pairings, or they lose their significance

3)Sandaime; if you're curious, it's Shodaime (1st), Nidaime (2nd), Sandaime (3rd), Yondaime (4th), Godaime (5th), and Rokudaime (6th; gonna be Naruto!)

4)yes, Kyuubi must be a fox demon; Naruto is a demon hunter who harbors a demon inside of himself; that sounds good

5)Sorry, I can't; do something Latin, as most demon hunters have some sort of a Latin background, or at least a Latin-named weapon (I'm taking Latin class, starts in 2 days; I'll ask my teacher)
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well incase you guys are wondering i got some of the ideas from the story "DOWNFALL OF THE LIGHT volume 1" written by Opposing force on ff.net

in that story naruto was a demon hunter and the author based the story with some warcraft 3 anyway i plan to write something like that but my setting would be in this world (schools and all) unlike opposing force which uses the leaf village hence the alternate universe.....

justu in modern times would be difficult but i will try. well just a warning the story would take place in my world which means my rule be warned for i will not be following the manga too closely......

to timeshifter: "how do you overdo a pairing ???" could you tell me so i prevent that from happening in my fic ?

to Nightambre: sorry bout the short form the habit of chatting with my frens have taken a serious toll on my english :-P

well i m working on the fic but do not expect it out too soon because i have advanced exams rite now... (great time to think of a story dun you think ?)

hey timeshifter mine asking some of your frens eg : white witch to giv me their comments ?? it would be greatly appreciated.....
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Hehe, guess that was kind of confusing. What I meant was having four or more pairings, where you're trying to have way to many couples together, and give them all their "moments" with each other, all packed in one chapter. It just doesn't work as well. Do NaruHina, and maybe one other pairing (though I'm perfectly fine with it if you don''t; NaruHina is all I need!).

I don't know White Witch that well, but once you start this fic, I'll "advertise" it, though you can do it yourself; just go in the sticky and ask people to read your fic.
What makes you think White Witch and I are friends? Your from Singapore? Do you know chibified kitsunes (fanfic author)? Anyway, I look forward to this fic.
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oh i am sorry about mistaking your relationship with white witch it is just i saw you that you were mention in one of her fic... so well i kind of mistake that as friends... ah whatever...

well yup i am from singapore (the place where chewing gum is banned) and nope i dun noe who is chibified kitsunes sorry...

well i will be most likely to post the preview of the 1st chap here today or tomorrow..
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Yay for chapter 1; when did I mention White Which's fic? Anyway, I look forward to it!
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alright the first chapter is up though short (well i this is my first fanfic so dont expect too much ) anyone checking this forum please go to ff.net naruto : the demon within to check out the story or you can just check my username to find the story i sincerely wait for your reviews :D
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Since when did I have a fic? :puzzled: My FFnet account is totally empty :crickets chirp:

Waaahhh, Timeshifter, you don't wanna be my friend? :'(

Well anyway, all questions have been answered, except for the sword thing. It's hard to come up with names, ne? But it's gonna come sometime...I'll try and read your fic if I have time!
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hmm... it seems i have made a mistake.. damm i was sure... oh well my bad, take it that i have never say it before :)

read my fic as soon as possible white witch!! because i need advice and comments because this is my first fic and i m determine to make it the best ha ha ha 8)

peace ...
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