[poem] While You Were Sleeping

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[poem] While You Were Sleeping

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I'm still working on getting a few more of my older fics posted here.


Disclaimer: Don't own them and never will. Nuff said. This can be taken as Heero's view while thinking of Relena.




I've watched you lying there in shadows
Caressing the contours of your face.


Light recedes at more defined angles
Bending your brow to a sigh
Reflecting your innocent smile.


Why did you wake me to your dreams?


I did not need to see
I will not make believe its truth.


Can you hear me?


ANSWER ME!


And there will be no more secrets
I have watched you sleep with eyes closed
Wanting so badly to kiss you.


But you answer me with darkness and dreams
While I keep my vigil.


Could I embrace this darkness
And release my fears?


Fall asleep in your arms...
Would you wake in my dreams?


HELP ME!


I know you hear me
Confess in silence
My desires...


Lying in shadows
Caressing the contours of your face...
I tell myself it is...


Just a dream.



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Post by Shooting Gundam Star »

WOW! That was so good. You really have a talent for potrey. :D

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Post by Kasiree »

Thats good. You have a talent for poetry writing. :D
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Post by Wingnut »

Yowsa! That is good.
Accually it could go both ways, Heero to Relena or Relena to Heero.
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Post by Raspberry »

*sigh*

So beautiful...

I agree with others - you DO have a talent for poetry :D
How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean

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Post by Mellie »

very well done! Emotional, riveting, thought proveoking! Excellent job, more poetry please!

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