Hurt (poem)

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Mellie
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Hurt (poem)

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My friends
Are they betraying?
My family
Are they listening?

I try to run,
I try to hide,
But it all comes back:
The hurt inside.

If I fade
will they care?
Sometimes I
Don't even know.

I want to run
I want to hide
But no matter what
I hurt inside.

Ending it
would catch their eye
But is it cheap?
To just let go?

I almost run
I almost hide
Cuz no matter what
It hurts inside.

I can write,
But I don't cry
I express
but not deep enough

I ran
I hid
But it found me:
The hurt inside.
Last edited by Mellie on Sun Aug 15, 2004 1:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by angel222 »

Really this was so great. I totally recognize myself in this :salute: great job
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Post by HeerosChick1842 »

angel222 wrote:I totally recognize myself in this
I agree only cuz i see myself too in this. nice job
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Post by Chibi-sitter »

I totally recognize myself in this
I agree only cuz i see myself too in this
Same here with me recently :( . Great work Mellie :wink:

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Post by Mellie »

I'm glad you guys are able to relate! It makes the poems easier to write, and helps me when I get down. Thanks!

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