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Mellie
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Post by Mellie »

If I try
maybe I can forget
If I try

When I cry
I can't forget
When I cry

But if I try
maybe it will be gone
If I try

If I cry
It haunts me
But if I try
I won't forget

How do I forget
The memories burdening
that hurt and cut inside

Will they go away
If I try?

angel222
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Post by angel222 »

wow :eek: that really is great :)
I'll try to send my story to you as soon as possible, but the problem is I don't have much inspiration today :-?
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Post by Perfect Soldier »

It's got a deep edge to it, Mellie. I like it.

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I'm not afraid of tomorrow,
i'm only scared of myself,
feels like my insides are on fire
and i'm looking through
the eyes of someone else

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Post by HeerosChick1842 »

:eek: Excellent job. I really like it cuz well it reminds me of wha im going thru. but back to the poem i like it.
Its all fun and games until a rampaging robot destroys half your city! ~*~
Oh...Thats a gun... - George (Case Closed) ~*~
Whats the cause of death?... We believe it is the knife in his back...- Case Closed ~*~
I only eat people who are not full of crap ~*~

Mellie
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Post by Mellie »

thanks for your reviews! I'm glad you guys can relate!

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