don't Fool me (poem)

[angel222]

Okay, I had inspiration to typ again and this came out of it.

Warning Angst


Don't fool me

I?m no angel from heaven
nor am I a demon itself
I am nothing more then a lost one
cast to earth without a purpose

Stop telling me what to do
you don?t know me, but I know you
Traitor Liar!
But you can?t fool me anymore

Accusing me from hating you
telling me I?m killing you
but you?re the one breaking my soul
always again and again

I?m sick of you ,don?t you love me ?
I?m not you?re child I?m you?re fool
do you see me now ?
Will you see me when the mist
around you?re mind clear up?

Stop telling me what to do
you don?t know me, but I know you
Traitor Liar!
But you can?t fool me anymore

Think you?re right but you?re wrong
you make me fall through unknown depths
there?s not enough to hold on to
now the memory?s are fading

Look in the mirror what do you see?
thanks to you when I look
I can?t see me
I only see the shadow of what I once was
I don?t see a beauty or someone ugly I see a shadow

Stop telling me what to do
you don?t know me, but I know you
Traitor Liar!
But you can?t fool me anymore

Mom I love you I?m so sorry
It?s my fault
Dad how could you blame me
so many things I never told

Things I found out
things that change my life
a new view on what once was
my own fairytale-life
But the sweet story ends
where my last memory?s begin

Stop telling me what to do
you don?t know me, but I know you
Traitor Liar!
But you can?t fool me anymore

So what do you guys think ?

[Perfect Soldier]

Sounds kinda like my older poetry... I call them my "emo poems" and or just plain pissed off ones. You wear your emotions right on your sleeves and you can really tell what it is you're trying to say. I can understand where you're coming from in the poem also. I used to struggle a lot with that myself.

Look back on this in say, a year or more and you'll probably laugh. Our experiences and opinions can change so much so fast that it's incridble to you when you look back at all the things you write.

It was really good though, you should be proud of yourself.

Zero

[angel222]

Thx for ur review
But I don't really think that I'll be laughing with it later , actually this poem tells my story for a part, but I'm not gonna bother you with that

Greetz Angel

[Perfect Soldier]

But I don't really think that I'll be laughing with it later , actually this poem tells my story for a part, but I'm not gonna bother you with that

Actually, I do. It sounds dumb to say but when you get older you view things in a different, it's all about life experiences. You can feel strongly about something but later on maybe change your perspective. It's just the age factor coming in on that.

[angel222]

Maybe, I hope so
but there are some things I'll never forget :-?

[Mellie]

emotions are aalways so clear in your works! keep on writing. And trust me....in the future maybe five years or maybe more, this will become an unpleasant memory, but you'll find something new.

[HeerosChick1842]

emotions are aalways so clear in your works!

i agree, i like ur poetry. maybe cuz they remind me of myself. hm.. dunno but wha i do know is i agree w/Mellie

[angel222]

maybe cuz they remind me of myself

I always say, in every poem or song you can find atleast one thing that reminds you of yourself.