Legacy 201 (Series)

[Fallen Angel]

Peace is threatened and Relena feels the brunt of that failure on her shoulders. As the universe prepares for war, whose gun is being held to her head? Chapter 8 has a lemon.

Couples: 1xR, 2xH, 3xC, (they are not brother and sister in this fic) 4xD, 5xS and references to 6x9 and 11x13.

<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy00.htm"; target="_blank">Prologue
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy01.htm"; target="_blank">Chapter 1</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy02.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 2</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy03.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 3</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy04.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 4</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy05.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 5</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy06.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 6</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy07.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 7</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy08.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 8 (lemon) </A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy09.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 9</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy10.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 10</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy11.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 11</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy12.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 12</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy13.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 13</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy14.htm" target="_blank">Chapter 14</A>
<A HREF="./uploads/fa-legacy_ep.htm" target="_blank">Epilogue</A>

[rellish]

That was such a great story! I absolutely adore fanfics that include a variety of couples and aren't just situated around one. Please continue writing, I loved this story!

[Pure]

LOVED it! SO awesome! liked the different pairings...also happy it ended happily ever after! Write more stries!




~evil~

[RDP]

All I want to do, thought Quatre as he sliced through the middle of a Scorpio, is find Dorothy, save the world and finish up the day with a nice cup of tea. Is that too much to ask?

Fallen Angel, this is good fanfiction. Impressive; how you incorporated such a wide array of feelings into this literary work - happiness, sorrow, hope, loss, love, pain...and managed to make it exciting with a dash of humor at the same time. It had a realistic quality to it, and although used a slightly worn plot...was able to present itself as...original.

I really enjoyed the way you gave each couple their own fair share of coverage. You also allowed the readers to see into the depths of the characters very well. The ending was happy, but not in the least bit cliche. In fact, I thought that you really had killed off Hilde and dumped Heero out of Relena's life for a moment...the whole time I was thinking;

No! You can't! You can't do that! Please no...

The suspense was unreal, and angst slightly unnerving (in a good way, especially since it made me appreciate the ending even more). What I mean to say, is that this was a great story. I was pleased by the fact you used all of my favorite couples (3xC and 4xD are kind of hard to find sometimes, and I like those pairings). Sorry this is so long - like Rellish, you have my respect as an author. Congradulations!

[SHADOW]

I loved it because it showed thair vonorablatys as well as them trying to rebuild thare lives & find what they lost on the way

[silent muse]

This is the third time I've come back to read this story and it never ceases to amaze me and have me on the edge of my seat. I'm a huge Heero and Relena fan, I don?t usually read stories that don't mainly focus on them, but I was just as eager to find out what the others were doing and how they were handling their own situations.

And more over, you kept them so in character! At times, Quatre seemed a bit out, but you made it believable and I loved the scenes with him and Dorothy.

But, yeah, I know I'm not saying anything that hasn't already been said, but this is truly a wonderful story, and I sincerly hope that you continue to share your talent.

-muse-

[Sovereign of Silence]

great story i really liked it YAY!!

[san]

Fantastic!! Wow that was such a wonderfull storie. The ending was not sad like I thought it might be. You really had me there at times. Poor Duo I thought he would have to live out the rest of his life in missary and Relena would continue living in regret. But you sure fooled me. Great job! I think it would be in your in best intrest to write a sequal to this.

Awesome job!!

[brandi]

This is one of those rare fics you can really get into. It felt a bit chopped in places, and the going back in time every once in a while to explain another side of the story really broke the flow. But all in all, very good fic. Had me hooked

[Primus2021]

breaf note 4xD in Chap. 4 That si called a LIMON even if it was a cuple of paragraphs it was still a limon, & now back to Chap. 4 I'll post another Reply later.


Sincerly: Primus2021