Strong Hold With Holes

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Ally
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Strong Hold With Holes

Post by Ally »

Go figure, I'm in love again...--;
The current man is very...helpful. He is just there for everyone he knows, but he is so shy and though I've been talking to him for about 6 months now I really don't know much about him. He doesn't like to talk about himself. You could almost say he is afraid of saying something wrong so he just doesn't say anything at all. But everyone loves him, and when your talking to him, even if its just silence, you can't help but smile. He is that great of a person.

In a strange way
You seem to know
What I am feeling
when I'm feeling so low

When the world speeds up
And no one is home
The hate and anger that boiles out the cup
Falls on you

The people throw knifes
Stabbing in the back
Tearing you inside
But you throw them back

When my demons become to much
and when the room grows smaller
There you are...

And I just want to thank you
You have helped me along
And I just want to thank you
You have made me belong

Late at night
all alone
There you are
My strong-hold

We've all got our problems
Both you and I
But after you have saved us
who saves you?

Your always there
Through thick and thin
You know all about me
But who are you?

Who gave you the heart
to love everyone
but yourself?

And we all just want to thank you
You've helped us along
And I just want to thank you
You've made me belong

Open up to me
Tell me who you are.
Who killed you?
Who pushed you to far?

When you're feeling lost
and like no one cares
Who do you true to?
Who do you let near?

Let us know the real you
Have your soul saved
Turn to us
Like we do you.

And I just want to thank you
And only you
Just let me be there

I just want to thank you
You've helped me along
I just want to thank you
You've made me belong.
REMEMBER:
First you pillage, then you burn. Those who do not comply will be suspened from the raiding team.
~Linda Howard
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Chibi-sitter
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Post by Chibi-sitter »

I like this one Ally, and I noticed you got a chorus :D
And we all just want to thank you
You've helped us along
And I just want to thank you
You've made me belong
:salute:

HeerosChick1842
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Post by HeerosChick1842 »

I'll agree with Chibi-sitter, I like it too. Good job :bounce:
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Oh...Thats a gun... - George (Case Closed) ~*~
Whats the cause of death?... We believe it is the knife in his back...- Case Closed ~*~
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Post by Perfect Soldier »

It's really sweet... I had a boyfriend like that once. I hope things work out well between the two of you. This was a really nice poem. ^^

Zero
Image

I'm not afraid of tomorrow,
i'm only scared of myself,
feels like my insides are on fire
and i'm looking through
the eyes of someone else

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Post by Mellie »

i liked this. simple but powerful!

Ally
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Post by Ally »

Thank you all. ^^

He hasn't figured out that its about him. He just thinks they are lyrics that came to mind when he asked for me to write some for his band.

Go figure, boys are stupid, but you gotta love them ^^
REMEMBER:
First you pillage, then you burn. Those who do not comply will be suspened from the raiding team.
~Linda Howard
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Breanna Graham
3/9/91-3/15/07

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